Hey, can I just say you have really great characters? They're awesome. :)
Only thing is, I think you made Saquia and Phinesa a little young at the time of them fleeing. Well, specifically Phinesa. She would be one at that time, and I just find it a little far fetched that a four year old could care for a baby who probably was only just beginning to walk on her own in the woods for a year...Would it compromise your story terribly if you put that age up by a couple of years? (I could see six and three to seven and four quite easily.)
Sorry to intrude on the story because I really like the narrative, and if you like it better your way I'll suspend disbelief. (Like all of our characters being mythological creatures, haha.)
I understand your confusion in my story, however, in my mind she can do it because she was born strong and it was a necessary thing she needed to do. Also you know how baby deer and horses can stand up within an hour of being born, it's kind of like that for satyrs only it's more like a week.
I think that's everyone. If I left out someone, just tell me. Looks like we need more Birds, and we need Stheno and Alexander to be taken.
Umm.... Kitsume I think it might be time for an updated list. I'm really bad at not speaking my mind sorry. Oh and a suggestion I have would be to include what species every one is. (Example: Alexander- Phoenix (Bmrbgttyjjl)) I'll even make it if you want. Just say so and I'll do it.
Edited By Bmrbgttyjjl on 10/12/2014 at 2:11 PM.
Lolidragon
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Posted: 10/12/2014 at 3:49 PM
Post #124
I'm so pumped to start this, but I think a list would be soooooooooooooooooo helpful first. I'll help out if you need it :)
Desiree
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Posted: 10/12/2014 at 4:32 PM
Post #125
Same here, I'm really excited to start this, and a good whole list of everyone would be nice! I like that idea of what Bmrbgttyjjl said. I think it would be helpful if you listed what creature everyone is.
We need to start. I can't hold my RPing self anymore...
Bmrbgttyjjl
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Posted: 10/12/2014 at 6:09 PM
Post #126
Don't I know it! I'm not very good at RPing but I'm pretty sure I'll do good on this one.
Hey Desiree do you like Avatar: the last Air-bender? I kind of based Alexander off of Iroh (You'd know him).
Ohmigosh! This is your SEVENTH character! (I actually went back and counted :}) I'm glad at least one other person's got five+
Desiree
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Posted: 10/12/2014 at 9:02 PM
Post #130
Yesh, I am proud. :)
I can actually handle more than 5 characters. I've done a different RPing thing on a different site, but that was like 10 characters... 'cause I'm cool. I can keep track of them easily, so yeah.
I'm glad you took in Alexander. :) I'm really glad we can start.
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