Well hello traveler, come into my inn for a bed yes?
No?
You just want bread for the journey?
Please wait and let me point out...
The sun is setting
The dark is nearing
You must not venture out...
Why you ask?
Demons of course, the sun protects us in the day but night...
May god have mercy...
The demons will hunt you down
Play tricks at first like a friendly game
But when these light tricks start
Run to shelter
For it will turn ugly within a hour
They start hissing and biting
Scratching and clawing
And you might even be kissed...
Do not laugh at that!
A demon kiss is scary
They kiss to go into your soul
And control you
As they devour you slowly...
But while inside...
They can get to other people...
And scare them
Hurt them
Even let more demons get to them...
So...
Beware the kiss of a demon
Beware the tricks of a demon
But all together...
Beware the dark...
Can I get you that bed now?
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 12:40 AM
Post #2
This story is based off my fear of the dark
I always imagine things popping out
'Tricks of a demon'
And I imagine monsters lurking there...surprising I don't have nightmares...
Please leaave comments on what you think and how I can improve!
Look out for future .......of a ........stories!
Working on...
Song of a faerie
Love of a siren
Growl of a cerberus
Flower of a lover
Song of a wind
Tune of a voice
Edited By Coradrawa on 5/17/2014 at 7:41 AM.
Soltra8
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 4:41 AM
Post #3
Holy O___O Amazing! I like it :) Can't wait for more ~
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 7:25 AM
Post #4
Yay! It's good :D
Glad you like it...I was a bit un-sure about the style it was written in...
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 9:07 AM
Post #5
Nice start! I'm afraid if bugs, nit the dark. -.-
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 2:22 PM
Post #6
Really? Thanks :D
And maybe I will di a special one ab;ut bugs for you :3
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 6:06 PM
Post #7
*runs around in panicked circles* Ah, okay?! XD
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/16/2014 at 6:07 PM
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*runs around in panicked circles* Ah, okay?! XD
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 6:07 AM
Post #9
XD
Hmmm...
Can I make a creepy one for Cystal that will make her squeal?
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 9:04 AM
Post #10
If you wanna. XD
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