Hello there
You are a tired traveler are you not?
Please come inside my inn
Bed is cheap and the meals are hot on this cold night
Please
Sit and eat this soup
Your bones must be cold
You must be hungry
Ah I see you have finished
Please follow me to your room
But...
Just one little thing...
When you get into bed
Don't look under the covers
Don't move at all
And when you close your eyes
Don't open them at all
Because when you get into bed
Might feel as though something is crawling on you
Because something is
Might feel as though something is scratching you
Because something is
Because when you shut your eyes
The feeling grows worse
And it feels like something is crawling up to your face
Because something is
You don't want to open your mouth
Or you'll feel something crawl inside
And you will taste it
Dirt on it's legs
Oh don't be worried
It's nothing serious...
Well...
Won't be serious if you follow my advice
I will know if you don't
Because when I next see you...
You'll be walking on someone else as well...
Just like all the other bugs...
Now sleep tight...
Don't let the bed bugs...bite
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:09 AM
Post #2
This is a special peice I wrote for my friend Crystal25152 who is scared of bugs :3
Please leave comments on what you think and how I can improve!
Look out for future .......of a ........stories! Working on...
Tricks of a demon Song of a faerie Love of a siren Growl of a cerberus Flower of a lover Song of a wind Tune of a voice
Soltra8
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:10 AM
Post #3
O_O Wait so if you open your eyes, your mouth, you'll tun into a bug? o.0 Oh btw, Cora, teach me how you do this D: It seems like poetry but it doesn't... Is it poetry?
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:13 AM
Post #4
Yeah... >_>
Also I have no clue how I write it like this XD it's just the way I find easiest writing because there aren't a lot of words...
Soltra8
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:15 AM
Post #5
Holy shoot! You would ace all my lit poetry exams! And keep up the good work! The story was really good!
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:21 AM
Post #6
Thanks :D
Also I don't think it is poetry XD
Soltra8
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:29 AM
Post #7
>< Poetry dont have to rhyme ><
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:32 AM
Post #8
XD okay...
Crystal25152
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Posted: 4/17/2014 at 10:11 PM
Post #9
Eek... That already sent chills up my spine! XD Nice job!
Coradrawa
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Posted: 4/18/2014 at 4:19 AM
Post #10
Yes! It worked xD
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