Hello everyone! We are finally onto our last starter species to get revamped...the Aurleon! As always, please be constructive with any criticism. We know that change is hard for some, so please try and keep in mind that everything we do is for the betterment of the site.





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They look super cool can't wait to see the finished product of your designers work!

Hey, is there a reason they look VERY similar to the old Aurleons? Or am I just imagining things? XD

Personally I think the original hatchling versions are cuter, but these new ones might grow on me.

Omg! They look sooo good! I'm gonna love them so much >.< Especially the babies, they are soo cute!

I do feel the female aurleon looks a little bit flat, like it's almost as if she is sucking her tummy in. and she just seems a little smaller and not as 'full' as the male. But i understand that's probably just the gender contrast. Love the feathers though!!!

I usually don't comment on the revamps because I have zero artwork experience and figure others know better than I do as far as critiquing goes and I just think everything looks amazing. However, I must say I really love the look of these. It makes the Aurleons seem more dynamic, and I love the long necks, definitely gives them a "swan-like" vibe that I enjoy since that's how I've always thought of the species. Can't wait to see them completed and released. :)

They look more like true Phoenixes now :) Lovely.

I like that there is a "movement feel" to them! I really, really like the effect that the female is hovering!

However, the proportions are off, I think. The female looks too thin in the belly, and their necks are fat in comparison with the rest of their bodies - hatchlings and adults alike.

And finally, I would personally prefer to have a sense that they're looking at me (like the current female) instead of somewhere else into space...

I'm quite intrigued by how this will turn out :)

Will they be out with the Megazone?

They look lovely. Definitely very dynamic, which is a huge plus for majestic birds. They look slightly less like huge, heavy, flightless swans (although the present Aurleon design is still miles above the original, haha), although the male does look a lot thicker than his wingspan should allow. Whatever, they're birds, they're light-boned. I do have to say, though, that the female's back wing looks incredibly two-dimensional, probably because of the line that goes from the neck to the end of the primary. It seems to lack the allula, primary coverts, and marginal coverts shown in the fore-wing. Just my inner zoologist bugging me.