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Typhlosion
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Posted: 5/10/2013 at 6:29 PM
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SunriseClan will be made soon.
Past:
There was this wolf, this wolf that knew the future would be bad unless she changed it: A frozen world, always cold, No wind, no sunrise, No light, it was called the Planet Paralysis, The world in ruins. She had to change the future. Her parents had died and she was a loner, she knew her name at least, Sunrise (Becomes SunriseStar Later) . Sunrise was a orangish brownish yellowish wolf. Since she was 5 moons old, she had to hunt and survive by herself, she really wanted company but there were no other wolfs she knew. Now she was alone, she wanted revenge on a certain wolf (Someone she doesn't know) That had killed her parents right in front of her eyes, If she hadn't escaped, she would have been dead, or she would have been..... Well all she knew was that it would have probably been horrible. Sunrise had always been scared since then, What if he found her? What if he killed her? What if...? Sunrise couldn't bare to think these thoughts, Ever.
Present (Part 1):
Sunrise shivered it was almost winter. Her prey was scarce so she was hungry as well. Then something happened, she had another vision of the Planet Paralysis, This time she saw that wolf, the one she wanted revenge on, All black, Yellow eyes, that had to be him. She saw a brownish yellowish wolf with him, she had a cold menacing glare and was standing with him. She had scarlet drops splattered to her fur. She was saying something... "We did it, We made the world freeze, that stupid wolf should have known not to mess with us!" Suddenly the vision was over. Somehow, she knew the wolf was talking about her, She narrowed her eyes to slits. "Your the stupid wolf!" She muttered under her breath. She shook her head, she smelt, A Mouse! Suddenly she spotted the tiny gray creature, in 2 more seconds the poor dead mouse was in her claw, she gulped it down, satisfying the grumble in her stomach just a little. "I guess I should get to sleep"
(I will add more later thank you for reading, I hope you enjoyed it!)
You may comment on how you like it and how you think I should change it.
The Black Wolf:
The Brown Wolf (Looks like a male but she is a female) :
This is Sunrise:
You MAY comment
Edited By Babaaeyes on 2/5/2014 at 11:20 AM.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 5/10/2013 at 9:10 PM
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Present (Part 2.1)
Sunrise woke up to the lush sounds of the forest, "That's odd, It's winter!" Sunrise shouted out, realizing she had accidentally slept through it like every year. Somehow, it happened that she was expecting pups, Well they would probably happen soon enough. "Ugh, they are kicking!" Suddenly, she saw another vision, this time it wasn't about the future of the evil it was about her kits. One was named Blaze, another Winter, and the third, Storm. They were playing about as Sunrise watched sometimes teaching them to hunt. The vision was over. Sunrise was happy her pups would be safe.
This is Blaze:
This is Winter:
This is Storm:
Edited By Babaaeyes on 2/5/2014 at 11:27 AM.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 5/14/2013 at 3:04 PM
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Present (Part 2.2/2.3)
Sunrise watched as her first pup played around, catching moss balls. I had been a few moons since her pup had been born, this was Blaze, and she knew it (Later Becomes BlazeClaw) Sunrise was happy for her first pup. The pup brought joy and happiness everywhere she went, at least that's what Sunrise thought. Sunrise brought some fresh-kill over to Blaze. "Here, you must be starving." Sunrise watched the pup finish it's food quickly. "Soon, you will be able to hunt yourself." The pup was shy despite it talking to it's mother. Finally the pup spoke in a brave voice "Yes, and I will be a feared wolf throughout the land!" Blaze puffed her chest out, proudly. "But right now your just a little kit that can't even hunt." Sunrise added thoughtfully.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 5/26/2013 at 6:06 PM
Post #4
Present (Part 2.3/2.3)
Sunrise had given birth to her second pup, Winter (Winterfang is the later name) a beautiful white wolf pup with gentle green eyes. Sunrise smiled as she saw Blaze and Winter playing happily with a moss ball. "Hey it's my turn to get the ball first!" Winter exclaimed "But I'm older and I always get it!" Blaze shouted snatching the ball and running to Sunrise. "Hey you guys, be careful and don't get hurt! And Blaze please let Winter have the ball for a little bit." Sunrise said it gently, she could see the sad face on Blaze as she gave Winter the ball. Winter started running away from Blaze shouting gleefully as Blaze tried to snatch the ball from Winter. Winter was a very fast pup and ran swiftly so Blaze could hardly keep up. Sunrise knew they were safe.
Edited By 2057 on 6/27/2013 at 10:00 AM.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 2/5/2014 at 2:20 PM
Post #5
Present (Chapter 3)
Sunrise had another vision, just before she had the last pup, Storm (becomes Stormflash) The vision was seeing the Black and Brown wolf. They were on her tail. She needed to move fast. "Blaze, Winter, we're going on a little trip." Sunrise tried to stay calm. "Where?" The pups asked excitedly. "Anywhere but here." Sunrise started moving quick as she could, with the third pup coming she wasn't that fast so her pups could easily play a little before she reached them, then they went ahead again. Finally, it was night, Sunrise found a cave and soon fell asleep with her pups curled around her.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 7/1/2014 at 12:30 PM
Post #6
Present (Chapter 4)
Sunrise woke up. Winter and Blaze were curled up against her, it was early morning. Another vision startled Sunrise, It was the Brown Wolf, she was following the Black Wolf, who was scenting a trail. The Black Wolf stopped somewhere, the place she had Blaze and Winter! She had no time to lose, she had to get going, and fast. The vision abruptly stopped. Sunrise got up. She nudged Winter and Blaze awake. "Wha..." Blaze said sleepily. "We have no time to waste, come on, we have to get going!" Sunrise said, waking Winter up and hurrying out of the cave. Blaze and Winter sleepily followed. They walked for quite a while, and finally, they came to a pond, at the center was an island. Sunrise had an idea, if she swam in the water with her kits, the scent would be washed away, and even better, there was a cave on the small island! Sunrise splashed in, hearing the confused mewls of her wet pups. "Come on." She said, swimming over to the island, the pups quickly followed. She shook off the water on her fur, the pups doing the same. Sunrise went to the cave, it was big enough to fit the pups and her with some excess room. "You guys stay in here." Sunrise said. She waited until Blaze and Winter were in the cave, then she went out and sat on shore, she fished. She managed to get three fish when she heard pawsteps on the shore across from her, where she, Blaze, and Winter came from. She rushed into the cave, and shifted so they couldn't see anything. She quickly gave two of the fish to Blaze and Winter, keeping one. As she ate, she heard the Black and Brown wolves speaking. "What do you mean you lost the scent, Shadow?" The Brown Wolf said to the Black Wolf. So that was his name. "The scent just disappeared." Shadow said, confused. "Maybe it's because of the water, you idiot." The Brown Wolf said. "That makes sense." Shadow said. "She's probably on the island, and we will stay guard here until she finally cant take the hunger, or she'll die in that cave." The Brown Wolf said. Sunrise groaned, why did the third pup have to come now? She lay down, panting hard. "Winter, Blaze, don't leave the cave." She grunted, clearly in pain.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 7/1/2014 at 8:51 PM
Post #7
Present (Chapter 5)
The next day, Sunrise had given birth to Storm. She explored the cave fully soon after. The Black and Brown wolves were still there. Upon exploring the cave, she found a hole in the back, they could go through and swim across, running away. She soon told this to Blaze and Winter, pushing Storm near her with her tail. Blaze and Winter nodded, and with that they set out. Swimming across was a challenge, but they made it without being seen. They ran into the cover of the forest. Running further, they ran until they came across a small band of wolves.
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