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Hello fellow Sylestians! It is that time again...revamp time! Our next revamp is the Lupora, which was picked by a site wide community poll. Below are the first edition sketches that were done for them. Please when giving feedback remember to be respectful and constructive! We are always open to changing things and these are just sketches and not the final lineart. Thank you! :)

love them!

edit: so now that i've gotten to be first :p

The legs on the adults could be longer and maybe thicker? to be more proportional to the rest of the body. Also, the female's mouth looks a bit off.

Edit again: So I've stared at it a little longer, and I've reached the conclusion that the reason the mouth looks so wierd is because it ends up looking like some odd grimace.
Large pup noses bother me a little.
Also, on the adults, I think that the line in front of their front legs showing the shoulder. It looks awkward. And closing the front legs and bringing them closer together will probably help the pained look on the male.
Please please please bring the male pup's tail down some and shift the center of gravity forwards?... -That looks more like a cat pose as of now
Their legs. ;-;
I love them fluffy when they're just line art, but I'm a little afraid that when they are added in game and the colors are added on they will kinda just end up like a bunch of lines. Like on the puff, what I think is excessive fur made me a little disappointed.
So... the lines are okay, but individual fur shading is not? (It's all up to the artists. just my input)



Other than that, I think it's good!

The hatchlings are SO CUTE! >3<

Amazing!

They are so gorgeous <3

Adorbs but the tails would cover soo much of the genes. ;-;

EDIT: But I guess that can't be helped if we want fluffy fluffy tails. And I do like them.

EDIT2: I do wish they had a bit more Sylestia pizazz, like gems.. or runes.. or a small aura of sorts.. idk.
Like the ryo has its aura and flying spheres, bulbs have gems, nixi have default runes...

Holy crap I love it even more than before.

The design looks so fluffy, cute, and the expressions are similiar but even more expressive!

I think it is coming along AMAZINGLY!

Id prefer if the tail didnt cover a major part of the body as Id love to be able to see the markings

I love how the hair is a bit curly! One thing I did notice was that the legs were a bit short, and the eyes of the baby on the right bug out a bit, but that kind of thing happens to me ALL the stinking time. As I said, really good art!

AWWWHHHHHHG there's no dawwwwggg there AWWWWUUUUGHHHH

So cute. I like them a lot! The manes look so dynamic here :D