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Orcastration
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 12:01 PM
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Whoppee i'm back XD
This will probably have changed by the time you guys see it but WHATEVER
It's supsoed to be a frosted mistletoe HOLLY berry or something
P.S. i'm trying to theme design so...yeah. Traits. Heh.
Edited By Orca2Whale on 11/8/2019 at 10:15 AM.
Minifang2006
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 12:51 PM
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Hmm pretty but on the male variation the shade of green around the face is just an incorrect shade, it looks a little off. Other then that I think it's good :3
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 12:52 PM
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That's problem. On the female something will look one way but the male looks totally different czu C1 and C2 are switched up and it looks bad :P
Edited By Orca2Whale on 11/5/2019 at 12:53 PM.
Orcastration
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 12:55 PM
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Made an few edits-slightly better?
Minifang2006
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 2:14 PM
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A little better, still needs a bit of work though :3
Cian
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 6:14 PM
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For themmed designe it is very important to have a good contrast between the body color and the one from it's genes or it would be a waste. Before popping the designe in the generator i hadn't notice the G1 and G2, a darker red in C1 should fix the issue tho. Another small issue that i found is that the wings and the mane fur on the male are a bit clashing togedther due to the shade variation. ^-^
Orcastration
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 6:17 PM
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Hehe yeah....
Thanks XD
(Darnit why does that ligh have to have such a floofy mane????!!!)
Cian
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 6:49 PM
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the mane can make quite a few interesting effects if you use the right colors so honestly it's better that way, to me anyway ^-^
Orcastration
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 7:23 PM
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True true
My summer journey lin actually likes semi good
But really.....
It just looks over floofy
Sunflora
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Posted: 11/5/2019 at 11:00 PM
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Oh...this is interesting. Not something I'm used to critiquing but I mean, I'll give it a shot...
So, like Cian said, good contrast between body color and genes is very important when designing a theme (assuming that is what this is for, I don't really know :p) and fortunately for you, you are on the right track as red and green just so happen to be contrasting colors on the color wheel.
The first thing I want to address is the initial body color. I find it to be a little too red, so, just like Cian stated, darkening it would do it some good. The base color did make G1 and G2 hard to see but yes, darkening the main base should help and if you want a little more green, make it green.
G3 is perfect, don't change it lol but to make some of the other traits in G3 work better with the colors (ie Floral Henna, Magma Runes) changing C3 to a more coordinating color may help some.
Also, adding some brown somewhere in the design would make a nice, earthy touch!
Again, I'm not used to designing or critiquing Lighiras so take this critique with a grain of salt. But this is a really good start! If you need anymore help, I'll be upstairs asleep.
Edited By Sunriseland on 11/6/2019 at 1:25 AM.
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