Thank you everyone for the feedback we have received so far. Here is the last iteration of sketches for the Faelora, any other feedback we receive that we think is helpful will be included in the lineart.

I think faelora are going to become my new favorite sylesti after this revamp! Always loved them, but felt there a bit neglected since deer are my spirit animal. I think this might be one of the most exciting revamps!
Kelpari will always take the #1 spot though. Having their ENTIRE species completely changed.
I wish you all luck and smooth sailing implementing the new artwork! <3

Ah! So much better~ The chest on the male looks distinguished and regal instead of over pompous like before. He is a proud buck now. I love the leaves around his neck too, they look much more interesting even just for a sketch, and match the female nicely. I think maybe a vine or two coming across the chest a bit? Like in the current version. It would give a balance to the female which has vines coming off her around the petals on her. Other than that, I am loving how this is coming together. Thank you so much for using our feedback and letting us help make this design even more amazing. ^-^

I love them. No reservations, ifs, and, or buts. I am so super excited for this revamp now!!!

i like it! i do kinda wish the baby male had a fluffy chest, to prepare us for the floof to come, but i still love the design!

Now, that's what I'm talkin' about!

Just a note, not about Faeloras but about Sylesties in general. I wish more adult male Sylesties had a smile, or at least a little grin or smirk. It's just not fair that it's only the females who always get personable expressions.

Definitely loving this! The neck and fluff and leaves and the smooth line into the chest/belly looks great! I see nothing more that needs be done to the Buck, he's fantastic! The female is dainty, her leaves more frilly/feminine and the back legs are now drawn together, she's lovely! The male baby's proportions are much better, I am satisfied with how he looks. The Fae girl was so cute to start with so I didn't have too many critiques for her, though I still feel her nose could be a bit shorter, she is still adorable! Great job and thank you so much for taking suggestions from the community!

The male's neck looks so much more elegant now.~ And the back/rear end also matches the front a lot more. I'd love more leaves/detail on the leaves, something like maple perhaps, to better match the detail the female has on hers, but overall they're looking lovely. c:

Love how you combined a lot of the feedback on the male, still leaving a bit of floof for the floof lovers but making the leaves a bit fuller for those who wanted more foliage.

Its nearly perfect! just a couple things i noticed:
the number of antler tips dont match up.. just pointing it out in case it wasnt intentional.

Also, if the female hatchling was flipped horizontally then the location of the flower by the ear would be consistent.


I love how the male's neck leaves look now, before i just thought it was a weird flower. its actually leaves? wow :D