Phew! Got it done! And right at 11 pages... ._.;

Hope you enjoy it! :D

(And do let me know if there's a problem with the link..?)

Link works and ohh awesome, I look forward to reading it tomorrow

http://dragonqueens.deviantart.com/art/A-vampires-birth-550947781

Here is my work. Just under 10pages. Unforunally I dont know any other way to show it off. BTW, it is filled with gore, curses, sexual themes and so on. Sensetive/young people are warned!

I only used times new roman (other than the blue text, but thats not part of the story)
The bold and italics were to show how its a flashback, as well as that the character is reading somthing. (ive read things before where it was not very clear if it was a flashback, articel, or the story itself being told)

Ok finally I got it up.

I remember the loud sirens, the darks barking, the hellhounds of Cerberus. The bright blazing of fire as I ran, only to get caught in a trap. Maybe it was because I was a vampire, or maybe it was because of my past, but they thought I had done it. But why, why in the name of all things, would I have burned down my own home?! It wasn't me, I knew that much. But they didn't believe me, and had just beaten me for 'lying'. The supernatural are not that forgiving as they are harsh and cruel; believe me. Besides, didn't they have the intelligence to know I wouldn't have done it? There was no logical reason for me to do it, I was a vampire, not a juvenile delinquent after all. As a vampire, wouldn't I crave blood instead of burning bodies? I mean think about it, does it seem logical to blame me? In any case, the Prison of Oberon was hell. Only the worst of the supernatural are there, and everything's either burning or smoking. Really, it's just a hot mess of evil. I wasn't even tough enough to defend myself most of the times from attacks, what would you expect from a prison of the worst and most villainous supernatural beings in the world? A hi and some friendliness? I don't even know why they put me there. I think burning down a building would put me in either a human prison or a normal supernatural prison. Not the Prison of Oberon. What had I done that wrong anyways? My past was before I was even supernatural, so I really didn't get it. I know normal vampires can't do this, but pureblood vampires (whatever that means,) are somehow allowed to morph into bats. The thing I don't get is neither of my parents were vampires, but then again, I lived in an adoption center so I didn't know them. I do know, if I were born a vampire I would've been one when I was born, but I became a vampire after getting bitten.

((I have to finish this later, sorry DX))

Okay, no more nagging this story to death. I may see if it needs a few more grammar things but enough @.@

Here it is, hope you like it ^_^

Umm....link doesn't work for me @_@

Huh, I don't know why it wouldn't. It works fine for me :( *is now concerned and doesn't know what to do*

Do you have aDeviantArt account? Maybe you can upload it to your stash?

I don't have a DeviantArt account, sadly :(