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Couple of oldies I found in my files.

COME BETRAYAL OR DEATH

(come betrayal or)

So long stranger,
Strangers never make it here
Where everything you see is fear
The rain lays down its acid tears
As long as you will be my dear
You may live in torture here
Come along darling,
You just dont seem to get it
If you want more youd best forget it
Leave it be or youll regret it
You just dont get why I said it
If it tries to leave you
Let it

(come betrayal or)
Girl youve made a mistake
Do you know what youve put at stake
You would crack before you half break
You dont know a thing about me
Im a trial of creation
Im the light at separation
When you feel this tribulation
Youll be gone by Revelation


COME IN WITH THE TIDE

Why dont you
Just stab me in the heart
Just put a knife inside me and
Rip my soul apart
Ill let you try it
Why dont you buy it?

Im a maniac for hire
Dancing through the fire
Dont you want to try?
Im a criminal-to-be
Take a good look at me
Ill see you then tonight
Oh I, I, I
I built myself a web of lies
Living behind a dark disguise
Did you know the demons in your mind
Are mine?

Why dont we
Go running through the woods
Well run until we fall down and well
Laugh like families should
Well start a riot
Whyare yousoquiet?

Im a slave and so are you
I just dont have a clue
We will never die
Now were swimming in the night
The colors of the light
Will come in with the tide
Oh I
Will wave my banner high
Today until I die
I have no soul
My heart is cold
My mind is frozen sub-zero
I have to sing
You are a king
And yet you are still just my baby

Why dont you
Just stab me in the heart
Just put a knife inside me and
Rip my soul apart oh
Why dont we
Go running through the woods
Well run until we fall down and well
Laugh like families should
Well start a riot
Whyare yousoquiet?



GOOD OL' DAYS (Circus Stiltsman)

I am the circus stiltsman
Climbin high, and swingin
I am the circus stiltsman,
Cause he alone would talk to me.

When I was tired, and so afraid,
He would come and he would say,
Im the circus stiltsman,
And you can talk to me.

I was young, and I was brave,
Way back in the good ol days
When we would sing and sing and sing
Dance, until we fell
On fallow ground we fell
But my secrets, hed not tell.

Yes, Id tell him secrets no one knows,
While he would dance on wooden toes
If he could fly, hed bring me there,
And we would sing

Wed sing of times, long ago
Wed sing of secrets no one knows,
Wed laugh and play,
And I would say,
Im gonna be the stiltsman.
I said, Im gonna be the stiltsman.

Now Im just a mindless slave,
Dreamin of the good ol days
When I would dance and I would sing,
Im a-gonna be the stiltsman.

Now Im just a mindless slave,
Drinkin for the good ol days,
When friends were free
And blind could see
And a dime was just a fortune-to-be
Oh dreamin of the good ol days,
When sun shined down its good ol rays
And I would laugh, and I would say:
Im gonna be the stiltsman.
I said, Im gonna be the stiltsman.




This one...is actually not a poem, it's more like one of those weird wacky musical songs (like in Funny Girl, which I think I watched before writing this at midnight, XD) It's Christian.

There's a...
Celebration magnificant! That we will all enjoy,
On streets of gold and gates ten miles high,
And...we will all attend
The...marriage of the Lamb,
Look at! reception dishes on which we will dine,
For we will be the bride, of a godlike kind of guy!
When the splenadid day comes
There will be no money sums
It is the marriage all of heaven wants to see ee ee!
Feel the excitement in the air,
Would you miss it? Don't you dare!
A daz'ling celebration, do stop by!
A spec tacular display
On our grand wedding day
It's a marvelous occasion, no deny
No reason to ask why
Were excited to be the bride
Of--he's majestic!He us kingly! He's a godlike kind of guy!!!!!!!!!

Free Verse

Fireflies

Accompanying the stars
With their own golden glow
A thousand- no, a million blinking lights
They draw us out to watch them
We gaze at them in awe
Not once looking away
Children eagerly reaching out with their hands
To have their own little stars
Illuminating a silent and once-dark night

this is great ^^ I love them all! I put them in your archive

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