I Love it!
The male could be slightly longer in the front leg to make him look a bit more proportionate as the shoulders are generally higher than the rump, but other than that they are perfect!
Can't wait for them to come out! :)

Promising sketches, although at this time, I prefer the hatchlings over the adults. This due to the fact that they look happier and more lively - and as always, completely adorable.

I agree with what's been said about the legs being a bit thin compared to the body, and that the tail might cover up some of the genes a bit. But I have to say, the new tails look much better than the old ones.

The current/old female has something of a playful gaze and smile, I am missing that in this sketch. I hope that's something you might consider keeping, as it has made her quite endearing to me. I even feel that it's iconic for the female Lupora, that half way over the shoulder glance that says: "Think you can catch me?"

My worry is that they will remain a bit "stiff" - which I have felt them to be for a long time (the male a lot more so than the female). In this sketch, the male's posture in particular comes off a bit like he has had something of a rough day (or is carrying something heavy on his back) and is just barely holding himself up with his front legs, with his head tilted downwards. Compare it to the hatchling, for instance - I just feel like the adult male looks a little sad (and stiff), whereas the male hatchling looks active, agile and happy. Maybe it's just me, but then, this is just that; my opinion.

All in all, good progress so far. Excited to see the end result!

~Moon

I literally have no qualms! I love the big ears because they look more like manned wolves. :) But maybe not make the male look so....angry? I really love the current male luporas' expression because they seem to have a regal air around them. Like a serious look yet not too angry. Other than that these look AMAZING! <3

They... are my favorite species and I like them much better as they are now

The noses seem kinda weird in the sketches - specially on the male hatchling, it seems a bit too big somehow

I do like the adults better than the hatchlings, though. Of these four I think the adult female looks the best.

Something about the hatchilngs just seems off... it may have something to do with the way they're standing? Poor boy looks like he's gonna stumble over backwards haha

Edits after reading through some of the other comments:
I like the adults' tails as they are, and the fluff. It looks fine.
I disagree with most people's thoughts that the hatchlings are cute - they just... something doesn't look right. The pose (especially their heads), the positions of their tails... it just seems off somehow
The legs could be a bit longer, I agree on that, and maybe shorten the adults' bodies just a bit to account for the difference? They do look just a bit too stretched out

I feel like the male pup looks like a puff..... but otherwise they are pretty great. I love the current desires more though.

not too be offensive but i think the male should get more attention because the female get flowers while the male is stuck with sticks.

Hatchlings are perfect- maybe keep an upright form for the male?

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=53853&page=1#1 Author: Faiona Time Posted: 11/15/2017 at 7:36 PM The Sketches Have Been Updated! Please View the Updated Sketches Hello fellow Sylestians! It is that time again...revamp time! Our next revamp is the Lupora, which was picked by a site wide community poll. Below are the first edition sketches that were done for them. Please when giving feedback remember to be respectful and constructive! We are always open to changing things and these are just sketches and not the final lineart. Thank you! :)

there beautiful

Idk, I really don't want to be like, the one person who doesn't like these, but since Lupora are my favorite species I guess I'm being more picky about them? I loveee the hatchlings, they are so so cute (my only suggestion would be the male's tail could slope in a bit of a more "u" shape?). But for the adults I kind of had a different image in my head of what I hoped the revamp would look like?
I have to say, I really just... don't like the male. I drew a quick sketch of what I was sort of hoping it would look like:


I may be like the only one who thinks this, but in the end I love Lups so much that I'll just be happy they're getting a revamp!