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Naofumi
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 4:55 PM
Post #91
Ooooo I love them! Perfect!
Beckh0und
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 5:00 PM
Post #92
So cute! I really can't wait until the finish! Literally, I can't!!! D:
Zelly
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 5:11 PM
Post #93
One of the big problems these sketches have right now is the legs not being on the same planes. Try drawing straight lines under them while sketching to make sure the paws are falling rough to the likewise paw in front/back to help with that. This can mostly be fixed just by moving a single paw on both genders. I also feel the eyes are just too small on them. They're very beady and losing a lot of the regal look that the Luporas have now. The male's shoulder on the leg I moved is also a bit too slender. Moving that leg out to match the plane of the hindleg would give more room for the shoulder to be defined to give a better sense of muscle. Would also like to see the female gain a bit of her neck back.
That baby male.. uhm. It's just not working. Female baby's fine aside from pillowtail which has already been mentioned.
Edited By Zelly on 1/25/2018 at 5:14 PM.
Cececat
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 5:35 PM
Post #94
LOVE the new sketches!
Faeyla
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 7:23 PM
Post #95
The tail going behind the legs looks really awkward, but I am not sure why. I also wonder how much of the tail genes are now going to be hidden by the legs. Maybe do one with the tail behind and the other with the tail in front?
I really do not care for the males expression. It looks like someone took away his favorite chew toy and now he is going to sulk.
Overall I like the direction these are going, but there definitely needs to be some tweaks to the tails.
Myraid
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 8:47 PM
Post #96
OMG too cute for life I really like them so far
Tama
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Posted: 1/25/2018 at 11:14 PM
Post #97
They look amazing. Very adorable.
Antiquechainsaw
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Posted: 1/26/2018 at 10:50 AM
Post #98
Maybe on the babies the tail could be a little frizzy, because, like any canine-like creature, they'll be out running around and playing when they're pups. Also, the feet seem a tiiiny bit too big on the adults - but I do love the bigger feet on the pups, like they haven't quite grown into them yet. On the famale adult, two words, ExPaNd NeCk. More hot hot nek. aLL THE NECK-- Other than that, I love them and want to protect them all. I want to order 5 million please.
Edited By Plaguesheepo on 1/26/2018 at 10:59 AM.
S13rra
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Posted: 1/26/2018 at 12:00 PM
Post #99
I love them! But the neck on the female is short.
And the tails should be more out and up so that they don't look so sad.
And the male looks wounded.
Cause of the way the eye looks and back looks wierd.
But i love the pups the male baby is too cute can't wait thank you!
-S13rra
Edited By S13rra on 1/26/2018 at 12:12 PM.
Galaxea
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Posted: 1/26/2018 at 12:01 PM
Post #100
I love them. Makes me wish I had the gold to binge buy a whole bunch of luporas now.
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