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Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
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Posted: 10/6/2019 at 11:32 PM
Post #1011
That should work. Mainly you are trying to convey the areas specifically that you think could use the change. So it if is wings, I would think that would be acceptable.
Edited By Celticnuru on 10/10/2019 at 11:54 AM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/7/2019 at 11:11 AM
Post #1012
Foreboding Gene
Redone
Hell's Arcane
Critique
So with your design the colors on the whole thing seems very muted, with too many browns. The blue on the shirt also seems out of place, it is very pastel compared to the rest of the design that is mainly monotone with earthy reds and browns. The wings also seem slightly out of place, as they distract from the background animal. The head could also be perhaps changed, maybe try the Ghostly Tiara, on page 29. For the shirt hex code try maybe a c5d6d9 which just gives it a more muted gray tone. I really enjoyed the expression on your character, it conveyed emotion well. The story you told with it also enhanced your design and gave it a good in depth touch.
Edited By Limor on 10/9/2019 at 2:19 PM.
Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
Threads: 164
Posts: 7,943
Posted: 10/7/2019 at 3:29 PM
Post #1013
'Oh, Timey, Wispy be patient! You can have the guts and the soul after I take the bones~! After all, I was the one who finished him off~'
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Thank you for your critique! I've made 'Wispy' a darker red. I've also removed some black from the outfit, I kinda want the wings and hair to stay black.
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Critique This is an awesome avatar design, very spooky. It was kind of hard trying to find something to improve or change in the design, but here are my thoughts anyways. I think the the bottom half bit of the body is a bit too colourful compared to the top, maybe add some black to the bottom half, or add some colour to the top? I personally think it would look better without the green, but, your choice. But other than this, awesome avatar design.
Edit: Also pretty sure you should change you image size.
Edited By Sairento on 10/8/2019 at 12:28 AM.
Shimeree
Level 70
Fancy Pants
Joined: 2/23/2017
Threads: 6
Posts: 261
Posted: 10/7/2019 at 6:02 PM
Post #1014
Demonic Necromancer
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"Out of all the things they were expecting, the necromancer being a demon ripped straight from the pits of hell wasn't one of them."
Thank you so much for the critique!! I've brightened the red and thegold, but i did use slightly different shades to the colours you suggested to make it fit with the colour scheme just a tiny bit better.
Critique
I absolutely love your design! It's quite unsettling, and it feels like those blood red eyes are staring into my soul. In terms of changes, I think the dragon/wisp thing in the background kinda merges with the red skirt, since they're both really similar shade, so making either red darker (#520308) would help them stand out a little. Also, I feel like there's a lot of black, such as the wings, hair and outfit bottom, and it would be nice to have some variation, such as an extremely dark red (#290500) or even a really dark orange (#291200). (Numbers in brackets are possible colour suggestions)
Edited By Shimeree on 10/8/2019 at 5:34 PM.
Shimeree
Level 70
Fancy Pants
Joined: 2/23/2017
Threads: 6
Posts: 261
Posted: 10/7/2019 at 8:49 PM
Post #1015
Sorry for the double post, but I realised I forgot to PING people with my submission (the post above). Apologies!
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/8/2019 at 11:02 AM
Post #1016
No worries hon.
Everyone, I will be do updates tomorrow and sending out mid week reminders to those that haven't yet posted. Keep up the amazing work!
Edited By Celticnuru on 10/12/2019 at 3:16 PM.
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 10/8/2019 at 2:35 PM
Post #1017
Vampire Knight
Critique:
Your design is great, but I suggest making that light red/pink on the sleeves a brighter red (BD3F20) and make the bottom of the dress a brighter yellow/gold (F5D742). Other than that, It really looks good and the colors work well to make it spooky. I love how you used the large horns to aid in making the design really show the demonic aspect.
Edited By Koterfaye on 10/10/2019 at 2:40 PM.
Duckbunny427
Level 69
Nature Walker
Joined: 3/12/2019
Threads: 66
Posts: 1,632
Posted: 10/8/2019 at 3:59 PM
Post #1018
Sorry! Gonna have to opt out of this weeks challenge.
Duckbunny427
Level 69
Nature Walker
Joined: 3/12/2019
Threads: 66
Posts: 1,632
Posted: 10/8/2019 at 3:59 PM
Post #1019
Sorry! Gonna have to opt out of this weeks challenge.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/9/2019 at 9:13 AM
Post #1020
Hon you have a broken image in your design post. I think it was your reference picture. Otherwise, very nice job. I really like it.
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