We understand you like Faye's design, however what is it that you like about it exactly? That should be in your critique hon.

Fixed it!

well i dont exactly know i just overall like it

Critique
This design is quite nice, I adore the shades of purple and red you used and how well they meld together. The mask you chose is also a very nice touch as its deformed appearance gives it a mysterious, creepy factor. Also, the red on the outfit itself kinda makes it look like there is a mysterious red light that's glowing so that's pretty cool too. With this said, my main issue design is with the wings. The brownish-black color doesn't quite match the rest of the costume. On top of that, the wings itself kinda take away from the creepy factor. I would suggest changing to either the Vorkid wings, Ny'vene Tamer wings, or the Bone Reaper cape. As for the color, a black-purple with dark red accents should do the trick. ^^
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When you do critiques hon you should always explain what it is about it that you like. Both positive with the negative. Like how the traits go well together, the colors, or how it makes you feel. Just something so they understand what was appealing other than something vague so that they know what works and what doesn't. Hope that better explains.

Today is Friday, and I figured to give you 3 another heads up. You only have 1 day and a half after today to get your submissions in. Or at least state you are opting out. Please if you need assistance, need to be placed an inactive list, and or need to opt out please let me know ASAP. Communication is very important, and I would hate it if there was nothing I could do to help you achieve success in the group. So let me know ASAP!

I think I am going to have to go inactive. I barely have enough time to check onto sylestia anymore. I will be sure to let you know once I can get back on.

Picle hon, your critique still need to be fixed. Your first sentence doesn't even count as part of a critique, "Let's get this out of the way". So the start of the critique would be your second sentence, and your third sentence has no ending punctuation. Remember, your critique must be 3 to 4 sentences long. I like that you pin pointed colors you would recommend changing on the wings. That was a nice touch. But you also still need to include what about Koterfaye's design you like. Maybe the choice in items? A particular color that really popped for you, the generalized theme of the piece maybe? Please touch it up some more for it to be considered an acceptable piece for a critique. You have until tomorrow at 5pm cst to do so. Thank you.

I have it notated hon. I wish you luck in your endeavors!

Sunny, I like your critique. It was in dept and well written. I also truly enjoy your design too. Should no one else post before deadline, I will still add you as an entry for this challenge on the Entries Thus Far post. Reason being, I can't hold it against you if we do not get another member to participate and give you a sound critique.