Scathreoite, you are quite right about how a real bonfire looks. However, when I played with "Guy Fox" as a 1-Vis (in either Gene One or Gene Three), it seemed to me that a Vis Gene One looked better in the deeper color.

Thanx for the feedback, though; I had not thought about thermodynamics at all when creating "Guy Fox," and I ought to have.

Esylana, your Faelora design is excellent. It is subtle, and Sylestia needs subtle as well as bright Themes. However, I agree with Xavion that you might want to brighten the eye. Golden yellow was a good suggestion, but I also think green-gold has potential for the eye color--



Opinions?

//super late to the party

Can I ask for some critiques on my designs? :O I feel like most of mine have that close-but-not-quite thing going on.

They're here, if anyone's interested in checking em out ono;;

First thing that popped out is theres already a Wilted Faelora theme on the site ^.^ Maybe a different name?

could i get some critiques please? c: i like mine but i feel like they're missing the "wow" that a lot of other designs have https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=29587&page=11#109 i'd be happy to critique back if you'd like ^-^

Favorite: (one)
Least Favorite: (one and why)
Suggestions: (please say which design)

suggestions so far~
-different color instead of light brown on fae

thanks for everyone who does this, its super helpful c: and good luck to all participants, there's some really great designs out there!

Okay, so! I'd like to take a quick poll. I really love my original design, but my husband thinks I'm being ridiculous for dying on Gene 2:



The above is the original design, I really love Leaf Veins, but after doing a bit of tinkering in the generator, I can see where people are coming from. So, halp meh Sylestia! ^_^;

Design A (aka The Original):





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Design B:





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Design C: 3 votes





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So please give me a ping and let me know what you all think! Thank you!

Personally, I prefer C, Esylana. The deep orange eye complements your blues nicely.

Finally gonna compile a list of my favorite designs thus far
*only designs up as of 10/15*

Aurleon
Barcode454, Scathreoite
Zelly, Skystone
Aquari




Bulbori
Silverwolf23


Draeyl
Arkhantha,


Faelora
Imperium, FForFox
Silverraven



Kelpari
Gingerpaw, Zelly
Silverraven,



Luffox
AliceHearts, Savynn
Owl0430, Liquidoven
Willowdarimn




Lunemara
Yukiyume, Barcode454
LunarStorm(I love flying foxs!), Lakarr



Lupora
Yukiyume, Barcode454,
Katelynn4545,



Morkko
LunarStorm,


Nephini
Yukiyume, Sleepwalking
MistDragon



Nytekrie
Imperium, Rixva
LunarStorm,



Qitari
Rixva, CaptainKat
Zelly,



Ryori
Donmino, Hanamomoya
Gingerpaw,



Sylvorpa


Vulnyx
FForFox, Sleepwalking
Lizswordmaid, Dial
Zelly




Zolnixi
Bunni, Kestral
Dial. Zelly

Gotta agree that the C colouration edits are pretty nice on your fae, Esylana. It's orange against blue-purple and purple-red, so it has the colours working for it.
A's purple doesn't stand out against the fae's body colour, while B's yellow has a bit too much difference between the yellow and the body colour (whilst, at the same time, perhaps being a bit too similar to the mut.2 colour?)

My main critique for you would be to remove the Puffs from your post. They've not been asked for (they've actually been specifically NOT asked for lol) and it's just excess the admins are going to have to wade through in a super long thread - but honestly I think they're your weakest design anyway.

Might I suggest some kind of contrasting colour on your Qitari, probably in G3? It's a nice design, my concern is that it's rather "same-y".

I think your Classic Horror Luffox is a great idea, I'd be happy if they were chosen!