sure thing! Welcome to the group ^^ there is still time to enter the contest if you like

And, I wrote another one...

"Sky on the Sea"

The laugh of a dragon
And the tongue of a snake
On an alien vessel
Leaving death in his wake

Like a star in the sky
We want to offer redemption,
But demons dont cry.

Imagine an ocean
With black waves, and shining lights
Just a ship sailing over each wave--thats your life
Trade love for your loved ones
And you did it for me
Out here in the darkness, the sky on the sea.

You cant shake the feeling
That it wont be alright
Sailing this ocean
Where it always is night

I cant tell a lie
As the moon said to sun, Ill keep watch of you tonight
And demons dont cry

Imagine an mountain
Pasted against the sky
Just another high hill is the loss of a life.
Trade love for your loved ones
And you did it for me
Out here in the darkness, the sky on the sea.

it's beautiful Magyak! I added it to your archive

Thanks! (all my poetry is sad now lol)

XD in my opinion those are sometimes the best kind

lol right tho?

Sometimes I scare myself when I look up and realize I just wrote weird things like this.

A
Breath of fresh air,
Like the laugh of a small child when
They run and fall and are up again
To live how they dont break when they bend
A
Spark of hope, the aching
Feeling like when your heart is breaking
The
Kind of heart-felt soul-fear shaking that
Sends you back under the covers
Like
Feeling eyes on your back when its nighttime
And you can see outside when the clouds dont cover
Like a whisper or the touch of a lover
That
Swelling motion when the waves churn the black ocean
A
Kind of power you can see when it comes to rise
The dreams that force your hoping that one day youll close your eyes
And open up again to see the dawn break
Feel love take
Like a snapshot
Embedded in your mind
You find
You love him.
You see the shadows slightly dim the sky above him
And suddenly you see
That shes the girl you want to be
You know it
We all know you are held back by the fear that you might blow it
That every time you open up your eyes you have to close them
Because thats how the world turns, but you love him!
You arent fit to live your life in this present condition
He sparks in you that ever-present kind of recognition
Who knew you could be so touched by someones imagination
Do you think he realized what he was getting into?
And every time you see that pretty smile now, youre burning
You can be desensitized to living life with all your yearning
And now youre paralyzed because you realized the hands on the clock are turning
Just burn pathways in your mind
Its like a fairytale-story kind
Of loving a demon at first sight
Just a child
But youre old on the inside.

BAM! just vomited up another poem. I am scaring myself.

I,
I dont want to feel like
The inside of a diamond
Glowing like a marvel, but trapped to a wall
Worth less than a penny
But sought by so many
It feels like a horror to be.

I,
I dont want to feel like
The sun on the horizon
A beautiful clash of yellow on blue
Id look picture-perfect
But life isnt worth it
To always wake up the same thing

I,
I dont want to feel like
An intricate flower
Alone in a field of chaos and war
If someone might see me
I could die believing
But never quite knowing what my life was for.

wow! these are amazing Magyak! really they are great!

i really like this one I,
I dont want to feel like
The inside of a diamond
Glowing like a marvel, but trapped to a wall
Worth less than a penny
But sought by so many
It feels like a horror to be.

I,
I dont want to feel like
The sun on the horizon
A beautiful clash of yellow on blue
Id look picture-perfect
But life isnt worth it
To always wake up the same thing

I,
I dont want to feel like
An intricate flower
Alone in a field of chaos and war
If someone might see me
I could die believing
But never quite knowing what my life was for.

It's beautiful