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Danithegoat
Level 72
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 2/2/2019
Threads: 45
Posts: 1,440
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 10:14 AM
Post #1101
Zombie Pigman!
Critique for DuckBunny
I really love this design. It really captures the Wither. It's been years since I actually fought the thing but I still can hear what it sounds like and when I look at your design. I hear the Whoooooh sound it makes. The use of the demonic essence as the second heads is really clever and something I wouldn't have thought of.
I'd make the eyes lighter, just light enough to see the prints on the wings and I'd darken the skeletal armor and lighten the skeletal helm just a bit. It adds more depth to the overall design without changing it too drastically.
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Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 4:56 PM
Post #1102
updated post
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 7:03 PM
Post #1103
YAY!!!! It works...Thank you hon.
Edited By Celticnuru on 10/27/2019 at 5:46 PM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 7:05 PM
Post #1104
Due to a fellow co-worker being in the hospital, I am having to work a series of doubles that started yesterday morning. I work another tomorrow. I will get the entries thus far post up I am hoping no later than tomorrow evening at the latest.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 7:06 PM
Post #1105
If you can't by tomorrow Celt I can, I'd be willing to be a permanent step in 'leader' for whenever you can't
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 7:07 PM
Post #1106
Is there something about the design you critiqued specifically that stands out that looks good or that you like? Remember they need to know what works specifically with what and what does not. You are great and pointing out what you think would or could use a change, but not what stands out that works. Such as the shades of color bringing out whatever, or how this specific trait with that color works real well. Please try to be specific with stating what works well in your critique.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 7:09 PM
Post #1107
I should be able to do that, but do you mind if I add you on the main page as a listed admin/moderator for the group?
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/24/2019 at 7:13 PM
Post #1108
of course Celt
Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
Threads: 164
Posts: 7,943
Posted: 10/25/2019 at 1:33 AM
Post #1109
Ok, Ive added some stuff to my critique
Wooloothedarklord
Level 63
Warden of Umbra
Joined: 2/21/2019
Threads: 114
Posts: 2,742
Posted: 10/25/2019 at 11:39 AM
Post #1110
i will sadly have to opt out i was planning on doing my designs today sence im off but im very sick i will probably be better by the next challenge
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