Quail Chick, Young Dryad, and Pale Rose both look really good!
Blushing Hollyhock looks a little strange. I cant tell what it is, but it might be the green and red. The red looks a little bit too orange, and the green looks a little bit too blue
I would add a little more variation of green on the Colorful Carnation
For the Vivid Hotspring, I think the darker of the blues (the one for the mane) is a little off putting. It feels a bit too dark, or bright, and I cant tell which.

Quail chick Puffadore:


It looks good, I like it!
I think I would use a either a lighter blue or dark brown for the eyes, it's the only thing I would change in the design.
(It's a detail, but I think it looks more like an adult quail than a chick)

Pale Rose Qitari:

I like it as well! You don't really have to change Maybe A1 could me a little more saturated and G1 a little lighter, but it looks good overall! Nice design!


Blushing Hollyhock Zolnixi:


The Idea behind it is good, but it looks a bit weird. I think it's because you use to many different colors. The red of the wings does not match the other colors.
Especially In design where you use opposite colors such as red / pink and green, you should select few hues (3?) and stick to them, changing only the light / dark value and the intensity.

I've tried to make a quick version, to illustrate what I mean:



You don't have to like it, it's an example :)


Young Dryad Ferrikki:

It looks nice!


Colorful Carnation Morkko:

It doesn't look bad, but there's something that botters me and I don't know why. Maybe you should follow Freki suggestion by adding more green variations, and also a bit more green in general?

Vivid Hotspring Lighira:

Nice.
Maybe you could try to use an aqua blue instead of a sky blue for the mane?

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I hope my comments will help you a bit :) My faves are Quail chick, Young Dryad, Pale Rose and Vivid Hotspring.

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