I have PINGed you all because I am still awaiting submissions from each and every one of you or for items to be addressed. Please be sure to read my more direct message to you below.

@Limor, Sunny, Bunny, Picle, Red, and Spirit....

You haven't submitted a design yet for this week's challenge. Please remember this is a short challenge, and you will need to submit one ASAP. Remember not to leave each other hanging in regards to critiques. Check in often to see if you have a critiquer and or if something else is needed of you. Contact me if you need assistance. Otherwise, if you are going to opt out please do so soon. I ask that you do not opt out for the fest. If you do that is not an acceptable opt out. Because if you can do the fest, you can spare a moment or two to submit a design.

@P...You still are in need of correcting your critique. Your critique needs to be 3 to 4 sentences long bare minimum. Not only that, but you must put up a reference picture of the design you are critiquing on how your suggestions would look on their design. Your critique almost must state specifics on what worked well in the design you are critiquing that you liked, as well as key areas of improvement. Please get that fixed ASAP, and touch base with the group often to see if you have a critiquer yet. Once you do, be sure to get your original altered piece in next to your original for your design post to be complete. If you don't get someone posting and critiquing after you by deadline, so long as you fix that critique I will not hold being critiqued against you. That is if and only if no one posts after you.

Oops, forgot to ping you so I'm pinging you here. The design is right above this

I edited my post, I hope that the critique is useful

P, your design post is almost there hon. Your critique is still shy a sentence. Review that, and maybe you can switch our some of the commas for periods. Just be sure the sentence makes sense if you do.

As for your other story/description for your "Superhero", you have 2 good sentences and 1 long run-on sentence. Your story/description needs to have at least 1 more sentence to meet the minimum requirement for that part of the requirements in this challenge.

If you need help, please let me know and I can better assist you with this. Otherwise, I have a suggestion for it listed below you can use and or alter whatever which way. That is if you so choose, and it will not be held against you.


"He is known throughout the land as the Peace Bringer, Renewer Of Hope, and Feast Summoner. However, his real name is that of Saffron. Saffron is worshipped amongst some people as a god of the autumn season, also known as fall for the good deeds that he does. And even though Saffron delights in the activities he does, he feels so utterly alone. The reason for that is, that Saffron is in a constant state of motion. He moves from place to place helping those in need as he goes. He only has a small group of individuals that he can actual call his friends that know if his plight and loneliness. But that matters not! For he thinks of others, before he thinks of himself."

Of course your list of powers is more than perfect. You already have your altered design next to your original piece so that is good as well. Just touch up the areas listed above and you are golden.

Spirit you are really spot on this week! All we need to do now is wait and see if someone else posts so you can get your critiqued piece in to your design post before deadline. If no one does, it will not be held against you.

And FYI...Yes, next week actually is villian week. So get your thinking caps on for that one.

ENTRIES THUS FAR ~ Post 1
"Superhero" Challenge

Below you will find the entries thus far for this week's challenge that have met all requirements set forth for said challenge. If you do not see your submission below you either did not yet submit one, or it has not met all requirements for this challenge. You have until deadline to make such submissions and or corrections. If you have need of assistance, please by all means reach out and either myself and or someone else will assist you. Just remember if you don't check your PINGs to be sure and check back regularly to see if you are needed in the group for critiquing, and or something else. Until deadline, good luck one and all.

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Sai's Designs:

(Dream Wanderer/Yume)
Original Design:

Altered Design:


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P's Designs:

(Saffron)
Original Design:

Altered Design:


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Spirit's Designs:

(Insurgent Demon/Bron)
Original Design:

Altered Design:


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Sunny's Designs:

(Fotia the Fire Elemental)
Original Design:

~ Critique ~
I am very impressed by your design. The only problem with it is that I can't find anything to critique! The design itself is very well put together. The colors compliment each other so nicely as well as the items you used. The description of your character is also amazing! It's so detailed and intriguing, and I loved the addition of the plot armor spoiler. I guess since I have to put something to change, I think adding a tail, like the Seductive Demon tail, would be a nice touch to their look. This is definitely a job well done.




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Fotia the Fire Elemental



Fotia is a fire Elemental born in the kingdom of Montrera, a land on the edge of a full-scale war. He was one of very few people to be born an Elemental, a human with a specific elemental power. Under the influence of the king, the people were told to fear these Elementals and when Fotia accidentally discovered his power during a public event, the Kingdom started a hunt for him. Fortunately for our hero, he was rescued by two other Elementals and was properly trained on how to use his element and spells properly. With his home near war and his kind near extinction, Fotia, and the Elementals, unite to overthrow the King and bring peace back to their home and their people.

i have a design but i cant think of a good backstory! (ARGH!!!!!)

I have too miss this week, lots of tests coming up