Watt pad.

*Extremely excited*

What do you mean my "Watt pad."? I'm going to need more information than that.

Wattpad the book thing

What about it? Do you want me to just post the links?

Yes

Hey, so I know this isn't a WoF fanfic, but could you take a look at it? I want a second opinion on my writing and this is the first chapter of a fanfic I'm rewriting. (This is the only chapter I've rewritten so far) Keep in find though that this is a draft of a rewrite. I'm probably going to change this at least 8 more times.



"Daddy!" Wails Aphmau,

"Stop!"Aphmau sobs and tries to get away. A man with purple skin grins wickedly and stabs her. A sickening sound of blood splattering fills the room as the dim light swings side to side, illuminating the blood splatters on the walls of the small storage room.

"APH!" A boy with brown hair in ponytail yells.

"Aww wait your turn," The man says, fake pouting. He grins again and grabs the boy.

"HELP! PLE-" The man slams the boy on the wall and with a sickening crunch the man snaps his neck.

"Shut up you brat" He snarls. The other children cower in the corner in fear of the man.

"Hmmm who will be next that is the question," He says taping his chin. A small boy in a gray squirrel onesie whimpers and tries to hide further by worming into the shadows.

"How about you boy," He says with a laugh. He grabs the small boy by his hazel hair pulling it back.

"Cute"

The man slits the boy's neck as more blood coats the walls and floor of the room. A small girl with a paper crown and a boy with flaming red hair and a gold Z necklace sprint for the door. The man lets out a small chuckle. "Sorry kiddos the show isn't over yet" he grabs them both before they reach the door and throws them against the wall. He then stabs both of them repeatedly.

"That was fun but I have to go kiddo's," he says with a laugh, talking to no one except the blood covered room and corpses. As he walks out of the room he closes the door and locks it with a soft click.

"Oh, my~" a voice sings out. A puppet floats out of the shadows.
The puppet sees the terrified bloody faces of the dead children. She attempts to give the children wrapped presents, but when she sees that the children aren't going to get gifts ever again a small bluish-purple tear leaks down her mask making the already present tear stains thicker.

"Give gifts, Give Life~" She sang sadly as she put a mask on each child. The masks vanish off of each child's face leaving them with the looks of a humanoid version of the animal masks that the puppet placed on their faces. The puppet floats away sadly as the children begin to wake up.

Pinging myself for later to read it.

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