Oooo thank you! Unfortunately I can't do much with changing genes/mutations because they've already been bred, but I'll see what I can do. I have a taste for subtle colors I guess xD
I'll get some work done on these and pester you some more later lol. Exams are calling and I must go
Thanks for your help!

haha of course!

and if you want to remove anything you can use philters of nullification, found in the scale shop!

that looks great! (maybe i should do this with other designs :P)

Hey Limor guess who it is! Me again!
I made some revisions to the designs, taking into consideration your edits. You don't have to re-critique them if you don't want to or are to busy, but I figured I'd show you my progress. Thanks again for your help lol.

Balanced Force:
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I like the yellow in this one because (before disney did it) yellow lightsabers were reserved for I think they were like sentinels or guardians of the force or something?? and I thought that was cool. Also the 'light blacks' because grey Jedi. :)

Bogano Vault
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Mine:

This one in particular I feel like was too muted in color (I'll be honest, I did it from memory lol). The tones did need to be warmer, but I wanted to incorporate the white-marble of those striated rock structures. So I did! Just a bit less. and more sunlight.

Caves of Ilum
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My Revised:

In this one I wanted to keep the colors because of lightsaber colors (oops just realized I forgot purple lol) and also emulate the icy-ness of the caves and planet itself.

Tatooine Skies
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Mine:

Out of all of my designs, I think this one is the one I'm most split over. I like the colors and the purple gives it the sunset thing (plus in the final it looks like the wings are the sky hehe). And I like your revisions and how it looks more like caverns and stuff. I almost feel like your revisions and now my final could be completely different designs... I like them. :3

Force Ghost
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I wanted to put in a tinge of green in this design (once more, saber colors, but only for the good guys). I like the dark body and more vibrant colorings.

Any thoughts on these?
[Would like to start off with the Restrict version of Galaxy Explorer]
[Galaxy Explorer is Design3]

((Sorry for the late answer))

not a bad design! You have a great start up and looking at the colors I have only a few suggestions

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With just the main body I would make the main body a darker blue



and the rest of your genes are good, but I would make the m1 a yellow to make pollen appear more 'glimmery' and darken m2




Everything else looks pretty solid, but if you would like trait suggestions i'll list some bellow

Thanks so much!

Can you help with the other designs as well?
(I dont mind what ones you do first)

*will stick to m1 being blue because I prefer the Orb being blue*
This?

U do some nice work perhaps you can help with my ryori design
If u have ever played dungeons and dragons you will know about Drows basically dark elfs look them up if you wanna know more
But generally they have black skin, red eyes, and white hair they worship a spider goddess and generally they can use magic but not all of them mines based more on the Drow high priestess
Which is where my inspiration comes from I call it the Spider Queen Drow Ryori and Id like to keep the
M1 and M2 and the base black color as drow skin is usually black or dark grey and the two genes represent magic and spiders



Heres a example of a drow priestess if you need more just use google images its pretty accurate for it
https://www.reddit.com/r/DnD/comments/7jpd4f/art_commission_of_a_drow_priestess/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf

I forgot to ping lol sorry