Yay!! Thanks! You did a fantastic job on the edit btw.

I hope you are all enjoying your time off. I hope that you all have a safe 2nd week off, and that your holiday if you do celebrate and cherish Thanksgiving is a happy and fun filled time.

Just don't forget to use this group on your other designs. If you have something you aren't certain of and want everyone's opinion here, and or want to get some feedback. Post it here and we will let you know what we think.

which of the two avatars from the Halloween design contest was your favorite? (i was going to enter it in the avatar making contest

camellia zolnixi


un-named lupora



malice ryori




sugar plum vulnyx (my favorite)



snowy christmas aurleon



glowing snow puffadore



swirling hot cocoa marshmallow cream quitari (yea the name needs work)




critiques?

above^

Name~Chills
Prefered name~Chills
Player ID~73295
Name of fav. species in Sylestia~ Cant decide between Morkks,Lighs,and Bulbs.^^

Welcome to the group. Feel free to thumb through some of the pages to see how things have gone so far. We will be resuming again on Dec. 1st after the holiday. Again welcome aboard!

I will have to take a serious look. I haven't really checked them all out. But I will let you know.

As for the pets you posted, are those your designs or ones you liked from others?

they are my themed entries

Your designs are all very pretty in their own unique way which is very nice to see. They are adventurous, and I like that you took a bold step with each.

Camellia Zolnixi - I don't think many things go a long with the magic spell trait, but that use of the spring blossoms actually goes well using the color scheme that you used. However, when it comes to the wings I am not sure the green color is something that works well with the other traits. It seems like it is clashing a good bit. It could very well be that the shade of green chosen might be what is of putting, I am just not quite sure as I can't put my finger on it at the moment.

un-named Lupora - I truly like the design of the male in comparison to the female whom seems overly busy through out the entire design. With him, it flows smoothly over all. The colors of brownish grey, light grey/silver, and variants of reds are highly appealing. However when it comes to his traits, the Harlequin trait is what pulls away from him. I think the tipped, skunk, and or short fade would have been a better choice here. Otherwise he looks great. She on the other hand is all sorts of busy. The fire and ice combo doesn't work well here, not at least with the color scheme. The tribal markings in the mane and tail are a bit off for me, as well as are the dragon horns. She has the potential for all that to work, it is just the colors with those traits do not merry well.

malice ryori - They are both individually pretty to see. The female though a bit overly plan, is still catching to the eye. Maybe giving her the ethereal horns, which looks small and petite next to his demonstalker horns would have complimented either other a little more. I would have kept the demonstalker mane throughout to keep them more even with the design of both. Because right now, she seems a bit trait heavy towards the front unlike him. Though with a name like "malice" I would think more dark that the pretty pinks and purples. Like below is the best way I can think at the moment to better explain myself about this.



sugar plum vulnyx - I don't have much to say about this design, as it really is very pretty. The genes I think should have been the same, with the mutations being slightly different to give the appeal of masculinity versus femininity. Other words, boys against girls. My only other comment is that female's tail though not my top choice actually looks pretty awesome. Way to go on this design hon.

snowy christmas aurleon - With this design, the design to me looks like it is clashing too much against one another. In this case, I think the concept with the female works better than that of the male. You took some very bold steps with this one, which is great to see. Exploring and trying new things is always a good way to test your limits and aim for new heights.

glowing snow puffadore - I don't really care for the puffs. However, your design was beautiful and well done all around. The color choices, genes, and mutations were all well selected. If anything, I would say lose the horn and mask and they would be perfect.

swirling hot cocoa marshmallow cream quitari - Yes the name is a mouthful, but I can see what you were going for with this one, and now I want a cup of cocoa. With these designs the colors are perfectly spot on, and really work well together. However the mutations are what are killing it to a degree. You see with this design, the dragon scales make me thing of chunky which can make a drink very unappealing. Though I don't particularly care for the braided main, it does work in this case. It is the wings being different from each other that take the biggest part away for me. Maybe picking one or the other. In my case I would have gone with the feathered, and tried to match the color close to that of the main body coloration. Outside of that, very well done over all.

You are really coming along very nicely as a designer hon, keep up the amazing work that you do.

By any chance can you take a look at the links below and tell me what you think of my designs for this winter's contests?

Themed Pet Designs

Pet Trait Design

Avatar Item Designs