Very great start hon, very nice. The only thing about your design post that I believe could use a little expanding is your critique towards another designer. You told them specifically what colors worked well, but fell short abit on what could be improved on. Maybe a suggested gene or mutation trait swap?

Remember hon your critique needs to be 3 to 4 good sentences long, and specifically state to the designer what works with the design to what does not. Not just that, but you do need a reference picture showing what you are trying to convey to that designer.

I edited my critique now that the reference picture was fixed.

can we do other products by the company like Fanta?

~Critique~
The flavor of coke you chose is interesting, I've never heard of raspberry coke before! I'm not a huge fan of coke but I do love a good raspberry drink so who knows. The concept of your design is very unique to as I imagine the mechanical armor is just infusing raspberry goodness into the coke so very neat idea there. However, I think you may need some help with the colors. When you think coke, of course you are going to think brown, I mean, come on, it's coke! So, for a nice coke color, I would make the brown colors red based with a orange/yellow based brown to add a bit more color. Also, raspberries have so many different shades of pinks and reds so try incorporating some of these different shades as opposed to just using the same color.




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Diet Coke: Strawberry Guava

You most assuredly can. I do apologize about the late response. Here is your mork that you requested.

A gentle reminder and one or two heads up.


Remember with the SECRET SANTA wish list, be reasonable. Just like the one whom will need to be you Secret Santa needs to be reasonable about what they get you and must at least get 1 of the items, though more if they choose only to do so. However, just remember NOT everyone has tons of gold, so making outlandish requests for extremely high end items suchs as multiples of philters, diamonds, max stat pets, and heeps of gold is not being very reasonable just remember that. Also, I am not saying that it isn't ok to ask for. You can...But just remember if you do and your Secret Santa is unable to achieve anything on your list it isn't there fault if they give it a solid try.

Secret Santas, when I do hand out your name to you with their list. Please do try to get at least 1 item on their list. If you want to do more than one item that is up to you. But if you truly cannot get an item on their list let me know privately so we can work out some details at a later time.

Outside of that, I have started working on updates and will let you all know once they have been completed.

Unfortunately not hon. Maybe down the road we can, but this is strickly Coke Flavors.