I really like all of your designs!!

For the

Elven Forest Ferrikki, I like the first version better.

Un-named Zolnixi- 5vis, I messed around with G1 and M1 and got this and I like it a lot.


Un-named Griffi-6vis/5vis, I agree that the flowers don't really go with the rest of the design.

Silver Moon Zolnixi, I added two more genes and think that it looks good- I don't know if you like it though.

Your designs are very pretty already here are the things I thought of based on your comments

So personally i like the ferriki on the left

For your nixi you could try feather dust as it makes it look like the trappings are flying away

or you could try enchanted butterfly but it will sort of become clustered


Your original design for the noodles was very pretty so I choose genes and mutations that to me kept the original appeal but also complemented the colors


For the griffi, I personally like feather jewelry better


For the next ferikki, I don't really know what theme you were going for, but you could change g3 to a flower to match the other traits || or if your going for a volcanic look, making the blacks darker could work


G3 for the nixi to me could be star runes to make it match the theme like a moon in a night sky but I also fell in love with leaf veins but it semi blocks the other genes

M3 you could try cosmic moth wings or glowlight

A lot of the ones you have look amazing!The green Zolnixi makes me think of eldritch magic.
As of the ones you think look to plain liek the last one.It looks pretty busy so i think it's good

As for the two ferrikki pairs

try the purple one with some tails and see how you like it...Poofy perhaps?
As for the Green/brown one i like the male design more just cause i like the darker colors

I love the parchment aurleon. Personally, I like the male elven forest ferikki.

Thank you for your help, I did no expect such a quick response and it was really nice to hear how much you appreciate my designs. To everyone else, I'm still open to feedback on all my designs as I continue to edit and hopefully perfect them.

The Autumn Tidepool, Parchment, Spirit Dancer, and Silver Moon catch my eye the most, so I would definitely be interested.

And here's my random suggestions, but it's all up to you:

Autumn Tidepool: I feel like the orange could be a bit brighter to emphasize the leaves, the overall design has pretty subdued colors so some brighter colors might look nice.

tweaked vs original


Parchment: Absolutely love the design! If the projects was going to be a 5-6 vis I would suggest adding some darker patterns to suggest writing but it looks wonderful as is.

Unamed Griffi: I like the design! Kinda reminds me of a canary or some sunny day fancy. I think the yellows could be a tad brighter but it's totally up to you.

Unamed Ny'vene: Guessing a winter forest aesthetic? Not sure on this one, a tad more light blue would be nice on the body, but at the same time the design emphasis the winter wind around a solid forest

Spirit Dancer: Totally not too much! I think you might even be able to make it more! I'm getting a colorful vibe from the designs so you could add some orange?

tweaked vs original


Unamed Zolnixi: Minty! Looks beautiful as is! The only thing I can think of is making the leaves and have a darker gradient for variation in green

tweaked vs original


Elven Forest: Both of them have their own merits so, I would go with the one that you like the most. They could have some gold for some extra color, possibly in the orb or the crest.

Unamed Nephini: Not sure, as Nephini's aren't my strong suit. If I remember G2 has some gene's that will add more patterns to the wings- though it depends if you are trying to do a 3vis or not. Possibly a slightly darker blue because the pink and blue are blending together a little.

Unamed Griffi: I don't think the Tribal Runes look messy, but if you really don't like them you could switch them out. Personally I like Lunar Runes as a alternative.

Silver Moon: Possibly G3: Advanced Runes and M3: Comet Moth Wings since they add little glowy bits but don't cover the body too much. I also tweaked the colors a little.

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