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Larkian
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Posted: 7/25/2019 at 8:13 PM
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So, uh, more summarizing here, Cobalt passed out in the middle of the road (Yippee) and almost got run over by a car. (Oh no).
But, Aidana was the opposite of Qatoria. Almost everyone had no power, and those who did were extremely discriminated, mostly because Aidanians were afraid of them. Not to mention it was a dictatorship. Which might've have not been that terrible, but unfortunately, the dictator was corrupt, and he was also afraid of Prodigies and Enchanter, because he thought that if they formed an organized rebellion, they could overthrow him. As a result, he ordered all Prodigies and Enchanters to be killed. (He didn't state his reasons outright, but he was the dictator, so he didn't have to. And everyone knew why, anyways.) So if someone found out that you were a Prodigy or Enchanter, you could be executed for some stupid reason. (Something like the Salem Witch Trials, I guess).
Now, Myra, happened to be the equivalent of a Prodigy in Aidana. Her ability was minor (like most of the Prodigies in Aidana), so she was able to hide it better, she could tell when someone was lying, but she was also unable to lie or keep secrets. So, she had to tell her parents. Being cowards, they were terrified that Myra would be found out and they would be accused of treason or something, but they also couldn't turn her in. So they abandoned Myra to live on the streets. Yay.
How am I doing?
Edited By Canawlia on 7/25/2019 at 11:13 PM.
Serenitea
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Posted: 7/25/2019 at 8:21 PM
Post #132
good! keep going.
(Almost out of time. If I don't answer I had to go to bed. Bed-time suuuucksss...)
Larkian
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Posted: 7/25/2019 at 8:23 PM
Post #133
No worries, I have to go somewhere as well, so I won't be able to continue until at least an hour.
Serenitea
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Posted: 7/25/2019 at 8:27 PM
Post #134
and I have to leave. Byyyyeee
Orcastration
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Posted: 7/25/2019 at 8:28 PM
Post #135
I can
Leo: *has to be held back by Nicote and Alex becausehe hates dragons wih a loahing*
Nicote: chill dude. Just. Chill.
Alex: you chill yourself
Serenitea
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Posted: 7/26/2019 at 9:27 AM
Post #136
Hello! I exist again :p
Larkian
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Posted: 7/26/2019 at 1:59 PM
Post #137
Hallo!
Hmmm where was I?
Oh, right. Myra was strolling around or whatever when she saw Cobalt fall out of the sky, rescued him, etc etc.
And so Cobalt was like "Ahh why am I in Aidana I need to get back and rescue everyone!" But Myra told him that it wasn't safe to go back, because people were disappearing. (Spoiler: Some of the Prodigies and Enchanters who were supposed to be executed were actually forced to work for the dictator, because, you know, for the sake of cliche-ness.)
(And here the plot gets a lot less detailed because I never actually wrote that far)
Obviously, Cobalt, being the reckless blind kid that he is, didn't care. And Myra was like, "Fine. Your funeral yadda yadda".
Oh, by the way, Cobalt was a character in Valencia Academy. So his other friends were looking for him.
But then (*details fly out the window*), Myra got caught, Cobalt ran into another Prodigy named Jocelyn, who had a very confusing ability. Basically, she can dump objects and people in the void, and teleport things through the void, (meaning, she can put an object in the void and dump it out on someone's head across the room very quickly, so it's almost like she's teleporting that object). So together they skip off and rescue Myra! Yay!
To be continued... If you want....
Edited By Canawlia on 7/26/2019 at 2:00 PM.
Serenitea
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Posted: 7/26/2019 at 8:01 PM
Post #138
I like where this is going ^-^ good plot and stuffs
Larkian
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Posted: 7/26/2019 at 8:33 PM
Post #139
(But it's so cliche xD)
And so Myra learned that (as I think I mentioned earlier) the dictator guy was actually forcing some of the Prodigies/Enchanters to 'work' for him. And the reason Myra learned this was because her ability was extremely useful to the dictator, so he moved her to a separate area, where basically they were being treated horribly, forced to do his evil bidding, etc. etc.
So, being the heroic 16-year-olds they are, Myra and Cobalt (and Jocelyn) decide to stop this. By enlisting the other Prodigies and Enchanters in Aidana that haven't been caught yet to assassinate Dictator Guy. Which would've worked wonderfully, except Cobalt got caught. Yippee.
So now everyone is panicking, but they still decide to attack on the day of Cobalt's execution (by decapitation! Yay!) anyways, because the dictator will be out in the open (although still heavily guarded). And hopefully saving Cobalt as well. So... time skip to execution day. The Prodigy/Enchanter rebels, decide to jump in and attack the dictator. The only problem is that he is controlling his own Prodigies and Enchanters via some advanced magic electronic thingy. And the dictator's 'army' is stronger, because obviously he only enslaved the more powerful Prodigies/Enchanters. But then, Cobalt's friends from Qatoria finally decide to remember him and come to save him! Yay! They kill the dictator! Double yay!
And guess who else died? Cobalt. Yep. How? Well, he got saved from decapitation, and stole someone's sword, but ended up getting stabbed. Yippee. Myra was sad. The end.
*ahem*
Now you must hate the story. It's so cliche and doesn't make sense and agh there are so many things wrong with it, but it's the best idea I had (sadly) so... yeah.
Edited By Canawlia on 7/26/2019 at 8:33 PM.
Orcastration
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Posted: 7/26/2019 at 8:47 PM
Post #140
Its better then my fanfic story about my ftiendsandmine weird marine life mc thingy
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