Ooh ok, take your time

Ok! So lets look at your design!

Taking a look at the design the main issue I can pull from it is a too muted color pallets, there aren't any darks or lights really to add contrast to the design and everything is around the same level of saturation. You have a good general idea for the color scheme, blues and yellows compliment each other.

So lets look at the main four body colors. Now the first thing I would do is change the main body color to a darker blue color. Doing this pushes the eye color forward and makes it look more saturated, this also allows for the body gene (which is a lighter blue) to further pop forward.



With this you could even up the saturation of the A1 (as this is the color that affects flame runes) too get further saturation pop


Lookingat your g2 I would vary the colors a tad, currently they don't show up too well on the feathers and either darkening it or changing it to a yellow shade would make it more noticeable



Your galaxy looks good, the hints of yellow help with the design a good bit :)



Now with your m1 what I could suggest is trying to breed in spring blossoms (which can be done by finding a public breeding rikki with that trait) which gives the lighted look and (if you plan on selling) will up its value



Though if you do that I would change the orb color to a darker blue color


Looking at your lunar Armour i dont see many problems with it but in the A2, the purple used is very similar too the main body color and making it either a pale yellow or purple adds contrast



The jewelry looks great!

Oh! I love it.
Just before I make my changes, what could I do instead of blossoms? This is an essence project so... I dont really prefer using Restrict(Except Galaxy Explorer)

Petal Pollen could look good but your original trial tails is nice :)

What are your thoughts on this?

I love them~

Thank you for the help! Next design?

I looking for some helpful criticism, so here are some designs I came up with awhile back.

Wasp Zolnixi:

Tell me what you think!

I love Dark Flames, maybe just make the yellow on flame runes brighter in the yellow section?