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Celticnuru
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Posted: 12/30/2019 at 8:10 AM
Post #1451
I can understand, just remember not to opt out too often or too many times in a row. See you next week.
Edited By Celticnuru on 1/3/2020 at 9:45 AM.
Sairento
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Posted: 12/30/2019 at 11:25 PM
Post #1452
Original / Critiqued
Critique
First of all,
Rule 5: Only use restricted traits.
So I changed some of your traits. Nightglow to Spectral Runes, feathered tail to Spectral armour, and torn wings to frost dragon. Overall your design was really nice. All I did was make M1(armour) a dark grey, G3 a bit lighter, and also M3 a bit darker.
Your design had some nice contrast, so that was really good to see. Especially in a full shades design. As well as this, I genuinely love Venes, and also love the mix of restricted traits you chose. Although the Vene is in black white and grey, I love the pop in it.
*sigh* this has to be the longest critique
Anyways, second critique. Maybe darken M2 And M3 a little, just to make the white pop a bit more. It doesnt have to be a big difference, just a subtle, light grey. To me it looks better. [Also, maybe add in an M1?]
Edited By Sairento on 1/1/2020 at 11:11 PM.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 12/31/2019 at 3:14 PM
Post #1453
Voting for "Noir" Challenge will be pretty simple, and starts this Friday evening at 5pm CST. What you all will need to do is after that time passes, PM me privately your choices for top 3. The ones with the most votes will be placed in the top 3. Any ties we be resolved by a third part completely if necessary. So again, please PM me privately through Sylestia private messenger after 5pm CST, NOT before! And by all means do no post it hear in this thread as it will ruin the element of surprize for you all. If you need further assistance, please let me know privately, and I will go into further detail if needed.
Until then, I will be posting updates shortly. So keep your eyes peeled!
Celticnuru
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Posted: 12/31/2019 at 3:18 PM
Post #1454
Hey Limor hon, is there a reason your one design has a blue tint to it? Wasn't curtain and figured to ask since it is suspose to be black, grey/gray, and white. I don't handle that species that often, and wasn't certain if that is how that comes across some times or not when you use greys, blacks, and whites. Otherwise, amazing designs. I really like them very much. Out of all of them admittingly I really like the one I am questioning the most.
Also hon, are all your designs containing only restricted traits?
Edited By Celticnuru on 12/31/2019 at 3:20 PM.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 12/31/2019 at 3:22 PM
Post #1455
Very well done on your design post. Your critique was well written. The only thing missing was the specific you liked about the design. Did you like a particiular trait, or was it just the different shading that caught your eye? Figured to ask so I could clarify it a bit more for myself.
Sairento
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Posted: 12/31/2019 at 11:09 PM
Post #1456
Changed the critique up, is it ok now?
Limor
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Posted: 1/1/2020 at 12:42 AM
Post #1457
Oh yeah im editing that, the ryos themselves have a blue tint tho
Celticnuru
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Posted: 1/1/2020 at 6:07 AM
Post #1458
That is much better. Also, could you take another look at Limor's and see if you can re-critique her 1st design with the correct traits. That way Limor can place the correct altered piece in. Thank you hon.
The only thing holding your design back at the moment is waiting on another designer to critique yours.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 1/1/2020 at 6:08 AM
Post #1459
Looks good. I asked Sai to re-critique yours so you can get your altered piece in. Then you should be ready to go.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 1/1/2020 at 6:10 AM
Post #1460
If you are being PINGed here it is because you have yet to submit a design for this challenge. Remember it is a shortened week. You only have until this Friday at 5pm CST to complete this challenge, and or clearly state you are opting out. Please do not wait until the last moment to post, as that is not being fair to the one you are critiquing.
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