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Typhlosion
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Posted: 6/29/2015 at 9:20 AM
Post #151
Creativity- I like the idea and the essence you put of the summer breeze. I can imagine it now, sitting in my cold basement juding everyone 4/5
Avatar Items- I like the way you put everything to use. It does remind me a lot of a summer breeze, yet i think the staff choice could've been a bit better. 3/5
Overall- I really think you should've changed the skin and hair colors to match a bit better with the outfit, that is the worst problem i see with this avatar (it just really bugs me DX) 3/5
Total- 10/15
Typhlosion
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Posts: 7,116
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 9:25 AM
Post #152
Creativity- I very much like the campfire idea and how you represent it. 4/5
Avatar Items- I like the way you used each item but i think you used too much yellow. If trying to represent a campfire a bit more, I would suggest adding more oranges and reds and maybe some greys to represent ashes. 3/5
Overall- I like the idea but it could've been just a bit better designed. 3/5
Total- 10/15
Cyanidae
Level 70
The Hallowed
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 56
Posts: 1,416
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 11:02 AM
Post #153
ah, my weakness. by weakness i mean thing i'm bad at.
*deep breath*
Midsummer's Night Fairy!
I love the idea of a cool breeze on a warm summer night, while watching fireflies blinking between trees. Maybe something else is hiding in the woods, celebrating the free feeling that time of year brings!
(I hated using the precolored outfit, but its coloring was perfect, and i couldn't get the other one to match. and i knowww, the colors are somewhat similar to Uranium's...i had the idea, and i was gonna go for it no matter what!)
Jai
Level 60
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 3/2/2015
Threads: 36
Posts: 3,254
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 3:27 PM
Post #154
Alright, Summer makes me think of the Renaissance Festival in Colorado! Last I went there was Fairys and Satyrs! SO......
(Im aware the tree is a winter item, but it looked best with the look I wanted and Im sad we cant recolor the sashy thing on the male body, buy oh well....)
Bumblebreeze
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 2/21/2015
Threads: 11
Posts: 751
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 3:36 PM
Post #155
Juri01
Creativity - 4/5 I really love the colours you've used in this, It looks fun and bright but a bit too soft for summer. Some of the objects you've chosen surprised me a bit, a good original design :)
Avatar items - 3/5 The items you chose aren't very summery and this reminds me much more of spring than it does summer (ex. Spring Acolytes Armour) The butterfly wings also made me feel as though this design would be perfect for a spring themed contest but just not summer.
Overall - 3/5 I really get a spring feel from this design though it looks very nice and well thought out. I love all of the sparkles, it really makes the design look magical.
Total -10/15
Edited By Bumblebreeze on 6/29/2015 at 3:37 PM.
Bumblebreeze
Level 60
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Joined: 2/21/2015
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Posts: 751
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 3:49 PM
Post #156
Avaelle
Creativity - 2/5 (It feels like I sound a bit mean in this, I really don't intend to! >.<) I feel as though there are too many shades thrown in here. Red, dark red, orange,light orange, lime green, forest green, gold, white, yellow, light yellow. Just too many >.< It makes the avatar look separated and out of place. You should stick to a good solid 3-4 colours to focus on when creating a design (For example, in my current avatar I chose light purple, light blue, a soft green, and white. Yes, there are more colours thrown in here and there but I focused on 4 main colours to make a more "completed" and whole look)
Avatar items - 3/5 The wavy gold edges of the dress don't go well with the sharp edges of ribbon on the pan pipes and the leaves on the head item. There could have been a better choice of items but it's an okay look.
Overall - 3/5 The colours just really threw me off. the dark shading at the bottom of the antlers turns the yellow into an ugly green which really doesn't look well with the reds,oranges, and yellows. I would have chosen a different colour for the petals and perhaps a different avi item for the head.
Total: 8/15
Bumblebreeze
Level 60
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Joined: 2/21/2015
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Posts: 751
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 3:55 PM
Post #157
Cyanidae
Creativity - 3/5 Ooooh yet another beautiful night design >.< Like I said to Uranium, the night doesn't remind me of summer. The long sunny days spent at the beach or at the pool with friends is what summer is to me. I really love this design but it just isn't that summery! Dx
Avatar Items - 4/5 I LOVE the items you chose, it compliments the design very well and it looks nice and summery! ^0^
Overall - 3/5 When I think of summer, I think warm yellows, light blues, sandy beige. Not Navy, blue, and Cyan. :c I really love this design but (Like i've said before) It's just not summer to me.
Total - 10/15
Bumblebreeze
Level 60
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Joined: 2/21/2015
Threads: 11
Posts: 751
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 4:00 PM
Post #158
Jai
Creativity - 5/5 I never expected to see this as a summer outfit!I must say it looks AMAZING! The colours are perfect! Well, just a bit of ocd on the girls eyes, (A tad bit too murky) BUT it looks awesome!
Avatar items - 5/5 Jolly dear people with happy birds near a tree with lovely fresh fruit. This screams Summer to me for some reason o-o I love the items you've chosen, a job well done!
Overall - 4/5 This design is very beautiful and Summery, it could just use a few tweaks here and there but other than that it's perfect!
Total - 14/15
Jai
Level 60
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 3/2/2015
Threads: 36
Posts: 3,254
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 4:03 PM
Post #159
0.0 wow, thanks for the high score, I really felt off about my choice, but im glad you love it so much!!!
Cyanidae
Level 70
The Hallowed
Joined: 2/9/2013
Threads: 56
Posts: 1,416
Posted: 6/29/2015 at 4:42 PM
Post #160
Yeah, the only way i could have salvaged the night theme, now that i think about it, would have had to involve fireworks or fireflies. Thanks for an honest critique though!
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