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Vaingel
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 12:42 PM
Post #161
Oh. That's cool!
Ah, cool, cool, depending on what goes on in the book, a mary sue can be pretty easy to fix ',:/ Like rey from star wars, but we won't go there. Also, sounds like a whole lot of plot convenience tbh ;-; Oh no, Cana!
Sounds like a pretty generic story a teen girl would make X3 no offence, there are people who really like that stuff, just not my cup of tea. (I prefer hot chocolate ;w;)
So what if you're dead, you'll still be trying-
*ahem* did you see my SeCrEt MeSsAgE~?
Larkian
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 1:45 PM
Post #162
I did indeed, it's in all white below that xD
Yeah. I was like, "Dude... I see you want me dead" besides, I don't have a soul in the first place.
Hmm yeah, I've been helping with the dialogue because nobody says, "Okay let us skedaddle then!"
Vaingel
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 2:07 PM
Post #163
Maybe I'll make a 'help cana figure out what they want do do with their life' club :P
The person who's books I'm editing, she had NO idea how to 'child'. Plot convenience everywhere. Terrible practice of mary-sue-making. It was a train wreck of a story, really. But I will say this in her favor: She knows how to type eloquently, and how to put things in a very poetic way.
Larkian
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 2:08 PM
Post #164
Oh, no, please don't waste your time on me xD
Did I mention that at one point, someone broke their nose with a GPS?
Vaingel
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 2:14 PM
Post #165
I'll decide what's a waste of my time, thanks -w-
Oh, my sister punched me in the mouth and cut her hand on my braces ;-; and a guy locked himself in his unplugged freezer, but because he thought it was cold, he died of hypothermia, and therefore died from placebo effect
Mein, weird stuff happens every day....
Larkian
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 2:20 PM
Post #166
....
Ow.
I was walking into the laundry room, missed the door handle, and walked straight into the door...
Also, I somehow managed to backhand this girl in the face and then slid like 5 feet across the floor. It was during a dance unit in P.E.... this is why I hate P.E.
Vaingel
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 2:22 PM
Post #167
Once I played wheelchair basketball in gym ;w;
It was
SOOOOO
COOOOOOOOOOL :D
Larkian
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 2:26 PM
Post #168
?!
Nyx0913
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 4:11 PM
Post #169
*Gulps down syrup*
Vaingel
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Posted: 11/19/2019 at 6:01 PM
Post #170
Yeah, basketball in wheelchairs
The tech guy at our school is on the Paralympics for it (he can't use his legs), and he offered to let us use the equipment that his team uses for a week-
so awesome ;w;
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