Much better

much better

Very dainty and beautiful, the artist of this did a great job:)

Thank you sooo much for listening to us! I think she looks beautiful now! :)

i really want one. the new look seems like a phenix

Oh how I love them <3
I just hope the flame mutation comes out well <3

Mainly cause I cant wait to see how this girlie looks!

Late to the party, as usual. I'm kinda tired, so IDK if I'll make sense tonight. e3e;; Bear with me!




The only thing I'd fix with the adults is their necks and mouths. Dunno why, but I feel like they'd look better with smiles. Or at least little smirks. As for their necks, they're pretty thick. I bet you guys looked at cranes for reference, amirite? :J But even their necks slim down in the middle. Plus, you're allowed to get artistic with it and make it stylized. So I suggest having the female's neck be slimmer than the males (which I made more angular).

The chicks could use a bit of modifying. For starters, their eyes aren't facing the proper angle. If they're facing sideways, their eyes need to be, as well. So they're not going to be perfectly round, dead-on. I feel like I said that before, but that's probably deja vu. XD Anyway, drawing them from the side will also help the face's proportions: having big eyes may be cute and invoke the baby style, but it doesn't work if they're not facing the same way the rest of the head does.

I also fiddled with their feet, because they seem a bit too big compared to the rest of their bodies. Also, I'd suggest making the claws both shorter and more rounded. Take a look at eagle hatchlings, for example. You'll notice their claws, while apparent, are so useless at that age that they're more like little stubs than anything. So it wouldn't make sense for hatchlings to have razor-sharp claws at that age. I also think the female hatchling's wings would look better if they were folded. Not only does it sort of give off that "precocious youngster" pose, it also helps break the monotony of "taking flight" poses. Notice how every other pose is like that? xD I also shrunk down both hatchlings' crests, because at that age, again, they're not going to be grown out. In fact, maybe you could experiment with having them look more downy or poofy.

Anyway. There's my two cents.

omg Cloud

I keep comin back hoping that they are going to be released soon xD
Fai, Krin, Why did yall have to make them so pretty that I now obsess over them -.-

These designs look amazing but I do have question.

Regarding the genes and mutations mostly the mutations centered around the tails, will they replace the current tail? You have many other species with different tails that replace the default tail but when it comes to this species it's more like the mutation for Paradise and Peacock tails are addons instead of replacements.