updated line art looks soo much better lol the first one looked like my little pony but what would be really interesting is giving them fish scales going up there fin like the quitari

love the new changes especially the transparency of the fins it will allow you to see the body marking instead of hiding them (wish the Griffi's had this)

I agree if they are supposed to be scary then they need some kind of scary feature added to their face/mouth

the new baby lines look great alot better now atleast for me

They are looking much better :) Thanks for the update!

The revamp looks amazing!

Are you planning to revamp all the creatures?

Ooh, I like the transparency.

Kelpari were never intended to be scary, their original lineart doesn't look scary and neither is the updated.

they look even better now! still not keen on the babies but what can you do.

If you read the first post Fai typed "The first thing you'll notice is the Kelpari have lost their back legs and gained instead a fish tail. To counter the predicament of a water creature fighting on land we gave them wings so you can just visualize them as basically hovering/flying on land."

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Edit: Adding in line to separate both comments so they aren't misconstrued as one

The females body looks so much better now and the hatchlings actually look like foals. They are much better than their first redesign design.

I do get what people are saying about fangs and all that. I understand that the kelpari info will need to be changed (as they've lost their claws and hind legs) but what the end says now is "Lastly, but often considered their most beautiful mutation, is that some Kelparies surround themselves with flowing water and glowing water lilies. While this mutation doesn't offer a physical purpose, it is incredibly mesmerizing and some think it is used to lure prey to the water's edge." Hinting that they are carnivorous (sylestia's an amazing place but I've yet to see any walking plants), and since they lost their claws (definitely not complaining about that, they always looked off to me) it would make sense to show at least a hint of fang.

Though they are creatures of your imaginings and you can do with them as you please. I thank you for all your hard work. Sylestia is a wonderful site that I love very much.

oooh, I love the transparent fins/wings!

That came off as very condescending and I don't appreciate the tone. I wasn't talking to you, I was talking to the staff. For your information, no mention of fangs was present when I posted that I saw. Please keep in mind that unless you are pinged in a thread like this, chances are really high the poster isn't addressing you, but rather they are addressing the person who opened the thread.


I am about to turn 52 years old, so if you were trying to impress me, you have experienced an Epic, Cascading Failure. I am about ask for a way to block people without them having to PM me first. Because I would really enjoy not seeing your posts.