is this better? sorry im new so i was not familiar with the traits. I still like this though!

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Oh and thanks! i like her story too, some of my better work except i forgot to mention that.....

while enjoying her life as a member of the pack even having a mate of her own, she still wishes to find her foster family and thank them for all they did for her. sympathizing with her plight and recognizing her strength and courage Deidriel vows to help her find her mate... and her family.

Primrose was the high and mighty princess of the Royal Puff Land. One day, she was captured and brought before the evil king of Puffranium, the land of torture and humiliation for puffs. He wanted her to marry him, but she refused. The king was just about to toss her in the dungeon to rot forever when a handsome hero rescued her out of the king's paws and brought her to his band of good deeders. There she lived happily for a long while, until some bandits attacked the camp and captured her love. The band of puffs ran for their lives, but not watching where they were going, ran into a patch of Forgotten Flowers. Primrose no longer remembers her love, but she hopes to one day reunite with him.

Sorry, that's the best I can do when I'm rushed lol :)

@Deidriel
Better, and it's okay, my fault for not mentioning it :P
Not quite sure how to introduce you to her, since you've already done it for me, but here :)


@Silverstream616
Before you even approach her she snarls at you, and you step backwards a little. You realise some remnants of her past may still be with her, and you hold out your hand to show her you're friendly. It's been a long time since anyone other than her love had treated her well, and she's overjoyed she finally has someone else to trust.

Thanks!

I don't know if were aloud to do more than one if not sorry ^^; I just like designing ^^

she loved fashion she made dresses shoes and outfits it was a huge hobby but one day the queen wanted her to make the best flower dress she got the prettiest flowers from the meadows and then the bandits came....

Ink was simple yet beautiful young Puff who was betrothed at a young age to a handsome prince. However before she could get married, bandits invaded her fianc's kingdom. The bandits than turned and invaded her home, hoping to stop her from being able to claim right to the throne, but she escaped with the help of her servants and friends. Alone, she wandered around, believing her Prince Jasper to still be alive. She joined a small band of Puffs, but only 3 days later, was found by bandits again, who chased the whole group untill they had to hide in Forgotten Flowers. While she can't remember anything, somewhere deep down, she still remembers her Prince, and will spend the rest of her life looking and waiting for him.

Once a loyal soldier of the Winter Queen, this puff was left for dead after a severe fight with the bandits that took her queen. With a heavy gash in her side she barely managed to drag herself away to where she was found by a group of outlaws. She has now lived with this group for so long she barely remembers her queen, though she still wears the armor that she long ago wore through so many battles.

@Lavenderrain
She blinks slowly at you, she notices your pack and begs to accompany you on your journeys, to find her mate.


@Mccauley1
I can't generate a pet with pearl vis, as it's a new trait. Can you tweak it a little please?

Sorry, I missed you as you didn't ping me ^^'
I'll make it tomorrow for you, since I have to go now!

Sorry. EDITED LOOK