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Forum Index > Groups, Guilds, Clubs, and Services > ~Writer Criticism Thread~
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Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
Threads: 179
Posts: 7,362
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 1:15 PM Post #11
Foxtrot sounds fine lmao
Kiwi14
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 1/21/2019
Threads: 55
Posts: 11,931
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 1:51 PM Post #12
Nice to meet you Foxtrot =P, my name is Foxleaf xD... or Kiwi
Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
Threads: 179
Posts: 7,362
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 1:53 PM Post #13
Hello Kiwi ^-^
Yamii
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 10/14/2019
Threads: 163
Posts: 4,952
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 1:56 PM Post #14
Username: Darkishcold (might be changing soon!)
Pinglist?: Yes please!
Genre of writing?: Mostly fantasy or sci-fi.
Are you here to improve your writing skills or to Criticize?: Criticize, probably will help we criticize my own writing. Maybe a bit of writing.
Extra (anything else you want to say): I probably will ignore realistic fiction and writing based off real life, since I'm terrible at it, but that's it. Mostly I'll be lurking :P
Edited By Darkishcold on 11/5/2020 at 1:58 PM.
Kiwi14
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 1/21/2019
Threads: 55
Posts: 11,931
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:19 PM Post #15
Might be changing? How do you change usernames anyways... and why would anyone want to do it? I like my username =P... criticize my writing please xD, I put one on the first page that is awaiting criticizing.... I lurk as well!
Yamii
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 10/14/2019
Threads: 163
Posts: 4,952
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:22 PM Post #16
You go to settings and there's a button that says change username. I've always been a little annoyed by my username, so I'm changing it soon.
Yamii
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 10/14/2019
Threads: 163
Posts: 4,952
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:25 PM Post #17
Hmm.... I just read your story, and it's pretty good. The one thing that got to me was... *thinks* Acturally, I think it doesn't have anything that need criticizing. Good job!
Kiwi14
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 1/21/2019
Threads: 55
Posts: 11,931
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:29 PM Post #18
That's cool! I like my username though =P... yours isn't that bad either!

Really? Thanks =3
Hiraeth
Level 75
Hand of Destiny
Joined: 7/14/2015
Threads: 187
Posts: 2,685
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:35 PM Post #19
Ooh I'll join.
UN: Hiraeth
Pinglist: ye
Genre: I try all except strict romance, historical, and nonfiction
What I'm here for: both!
Extra: I can do editing manuscripts (as long as they're not too long - <2000 words). I'm also a published author! :D
Kiwi14
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 1/21/2019
Threads: 55
Posts: 11,931
Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:40 PM Post #20
A published author? Teach me the ways of writing xD. I try and... I fail =P. So far Isa is a poor little mess in the corner, I'm sorry Isa TwT... and all my story ideas are just ideas...
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