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Littletoes101
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 9/6/2015
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Posts: 658
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 3:00 PM
Post #201
Alright, thank you
Redfix
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 6/27/2015
Threads: 97
Posts: 1,877
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 3:01 PM
Post #202
I feel you, my friend. It's happened to me soo many times to me too. I know exactly how you feel.
Redfix
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
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Posts: 1,877
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 3:02 PM
Post #203
I was talking about the fifteenth of November
Littletoes101
Level 60
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Joined: 9/6/2015
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Posts: 658
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 3:02 PM
Post #204
The prompt can't last that long, I'm sorry
Redfix
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Posted: 10/9/2015 at 3:33 PM
Post #205
LOL!!!! XD XD XD XD
I'm laughing so hard right now, I was JK!!
Amarok
Level 75
Terrifyingly Thrifty
Joined: 4/17/2015
Threads: 105
Posts: 2,892
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 9:36 PM
Post #206
Thanks for inviting me. Here's my short writing to the prompt.
Thump. The sound resonated from the corner of my room.
Bloody hell! I groaned and pulled the quilt over my face, trying to ignore it. It had been going on for a few hours. At first, I didn't mind too much, considering I was contentedly playing video-games. My first reaction was to put my headphones in and then hope that the noise would stop. That didn't really work when it came time for me to sleep, though.
Thump. Thump. THUMP. It was coming from my bar-fridge.
"Go away!" I snarled. Like that's going to help. If only I was a little braver, I'd be able to do something about it. What could possibly be in there, anyway?
Suddenly, an ominous wailing noise erupted from the fridge and I heard the door slam open. I froze in panic.This is it. I'm actually going to die from something in the fridge. I braced for the end. Nothing happened.
I nervously peeked out from my quilts and saw a moldy half-eaten burrito hovering over me with maliciously glowing eyes.
"EAT ME!" It wailed like a cat as its eyes locked onto mine. Suddenly I remembered. Two weeks ago: Midnight hunger. Dodgy fast-food shop. Under-cooked chicken. Sentient food. Sentient food?
"NO!" I yelped in terror. "You're horrible! You poisoned me!" Oh, why did I put it back in the fridge instead of the bin?
"DON'T INSULT ME!" It growled. "WE WERE GOING TO BE FRIENDS! HOW COULD YOU BETRAY ME LIKE THIS?!"
"No! Go away! I just want to sleep!" I pleaded.
"OH, really?" The burrito huffed. "You kept me in the fridge for TWO WEEKS! How selfish! Now I've got all this green fur on me. It's gross."
"Uh, I- I'm sorry." I stammered in shock.
"Nup! Sorry just doesn't cut it. I'm done!" The burrito huffed. "Goodbye." Suddenly he vanished into thin air.
I never saw him again.
Edit: The apostrophes and quotation marks didn't copy across properly. I think I've fixed it all.
Edited By Amarok on 10/9/2015 at 9:47 PM.
Sameri
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 10/1/2015
Threads: 5
Posts: 104
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 9:38 PM
Post #207
LMAO you're short story XDDDDD
Amarok
Level 75
Terrifyingly Thrifty
Joined: 4/17/2015
Threads: 105
Posts: 2,892
Posted: 10/9/2015 at 9:44 PM
Post #208
I'm glad you liked it.
The world needs more absurd things in it.
MystyRose
Level 60
Cutely Creative
Joined: 11/30/2014
Threads: 6
Posts: 313
Posted: 10/11/2015 at 6:34 PM
Post #209
Form
Username: MystyRose
How long have you been writing?: On and off for eight years.
Have you finished any stories/books/collections/etc?: No ( My biggest problem), although I am working on a few stories and fanfics.
Do you have any stories here? If so, please link them: nope,sorry.
Are you open to receiving critiques/comments?: Yes
Are you open to giving critiques/comments?: Yes
