Your design is amazing, the horns used are great to show the long stinger of this insect, and the colors match almost perfectly. The Milk Snake trait was also a great choice to show the striped pattern. The only problem I see is that there is too much orange. I would suggest making it more of a sunset orange or scarlet than just orange. I also think adding a trait onto the wings would give it a better look as well.
Sophiegrace
Level 62
Corporal
Joined: 12/2/2018
Threads: 9
Posts: 455
Posted: 4/27/2020 at 10:56 AM
Post #2134
Critique
I loved your designs. The butterfly one in particular is lovely, I really liked the various shades of blue you used. It made the design pop. One thing that I would suggest is maybe adding a slightly deeper blueish green tone like in the picture for your Trilobite Beetle.
Blue Morpho Butterfly
Vs.
(The first design being the original and the second being after taking the critique)
Orchid Mantis
Edited By Sophiegrace on 4/27/2020 at 1:11 PM.
Dragongem23
Level 63
The Tender
Joined: 7/19/2017
Threads: 254
Posts: 25,229
Posted: 4/27/2020 at 12:32 PM
Post #2135
@Sophiegrace
I love your Blue Morpho one,to be 100% honest,i just feel like the black isn't stated enough and the body feels so grey,so maybe another G3 would work?I love the way you did incorporate the blue into the wings and how the trait does make it look like the pattern on it's wings.I also love how the white ends up showing through the tail instead of through spots
Luna Moth Edit
Rhinoceros Beetle
I have the weird feeling my Reference Image won't show up (I can't check because my computer is funky)
So you can click here for it
Edited By Dragongem23 on 5/3/2020 at 7:57 PM.
Shimeree
Level 70
Fancy Pants
Joined: 2/23/2017
Threads: 6
Posts: 261
Posted: 4/27/2020 at 7:48 PM
Post #2136
Critique for Dragongem23
I think your Luna Moth design looks absolutely stunning. I love how you have Skullmoth's mark in G3 to add a little bit more 'moth', used the Lunar Pearl Armor to represent the eyespots on the wings, and the Petal Markings to add that vivid purple outlining. However, I feel like your design could use some bright white to represent the fluffy white body of the moth. I have changed C2 to F5FCFF in my example, though you could most certainly use something a little lighter or darker depending on your preferences. In addition, it would be nice to add some of the more yellowy-green to your design like the top parts of the wings. I changed G1 to E1FFD4 but you could instead change C1 to something more yellow instead if you feel that fits better. Overall, though, I think your design is pretty much perfect apart from a few small tweaks!
-->
Peacock Spider
Ulysses Butterfly
Hummingbird Hawk Moth
Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
Threads: 179
Posts: 7,362
Posted: 4/28/2020 at 3:06 PM
Post #2137
@Shimeree
I love how the wings looked just like the butterfly! The colors are nice too, except I'd change M1 to a Lily Tail and make it a bit darker. I would make it darker because there's a really dark, vibrant black around the wingtips and body. I'd also make the wings a bit brighter blue, because the wings are a really vibrant and showy blue that should stand out a bit more. And the G1 should be Tips instead of Frosted, in my opinion, because if you look at its wings, the tips of the wings are black and I think the flower should match the wings. One last thing, I would add an M3 to represent pollen, and I chose Mystical Petals. Althogether, I really liked how the wings looked a lot like the butterfly and how the G3 seemed a lot like the butterfly's body.
to
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
~Orchid Mantis~
~Monarch Butterfly~
Edited By Stryker666 on 4/30/2020 at 1:08 PM.
Akirashadowwolf
Level 54
Snow Wars Combatant
Joined: 10/2/2018
Threads: 39
Posts: 933
Posted: 4/28/2020 at 10:05 PM
Post #2138
Thank you so much! I think I would rather go with the COD. Also I'm having to opt out of this weeks challenge as the local emergency management agency has chosen the hotel I work at as a hospital over flow so it's all hands on deck.
Edited By Akirashadowwolf on 4/28/2020 at 10:18 PM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 4/29/2020 at 5:20 AM
Post #2139
Hello please add more feedback! Such as what you liked about it, why the black isnt stated enough, anything else you dont like and just go a bit more indepth :)
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 4/29/2020 at 5:21 AM
Post #2140
Add a bit more to your feedback! Why should the tail be changed? why should the color be altered? What about the design do you like? In general just go a bit more indepth for your critique :)
Go to Page:
1, 2, 3... 213, 214, 215... 348, 349, 350
Confirm Action
Are you sure you wish to delete this post?
Confirm Action
Are you sure you wish to restore this post?
Confirm Action
Are you sure you wish to report this post?
Go to Top
This Page loaded in 0.032 seconds.
Terms of Service | Privacy Policy | Contact Us | Credits | Job Opportunities
/85455257-56a709dc5f9b58b7d0e6347e.jpg)
