It's still blurry, but it turns a bit better.

*i try to find where the hissing is coming from*

It's from outside.

Its from outside.

*i start to head outside to see what it was*

It was Hailpaw, he was attacking Smallpaw. No one dared to go near.

It was Hailpaw, he was attacking Smallpaw. No one dared to go near.

"hey!! leave Smallpaw alone!!" *i hiss at Hailpaw as best i can*

He stops and turns to you, leaving Smallpaw limp and bleeding.
"So little kitty wants a turn huh?!" He laughed crazily, his tail lashing.
He lept at you, catching your ear and shoulder, before a flash of orange passes by.
You hear a thud, Hailpaw had hit the great tree, and your father was standing over the apprentice.

Hailpaw went limp, but he was still breathing.

He stops and turns to you, leaving Smallpaw limp and bleeding.
"So little kitty wants a turn huh?!" He laughed crazily, his tail lashing.
He lept at you, catching your ear and shoulder, before a flash of orange passes by.
You hear a thud, Hailpaw had hit the great tree, and your father was standing over the apprentice.

Hailpaw went limp, but he was still breathing.

*seems scared but i rush over to Smallpaw, seeing if i could help to stop his bleeding,* *seems more worried about Smallpaw than i do myself*

Smallpaw was still.
For a very long minute you thought he was dead, but he took a shallow breath.

Turtlestep rushed over muttering something before she blinked. "He isn't dead but," She hesitated. "Is in a coma. Such a young cat wouldn't even survive that, but he did."
"And for Hailpaw. He's dead." Your father yowled, carrying the body back.

Smallpaw was still.
For a very long minute you thought he was dead, but he took a shallow breath.

Turtlestep rushed over muttering something before she blinked. "He isn't dead but," She hesitated. "Is in a coma. Such a young cat wouldn't even survive that, but he did."
"And for Hailpaw. He's dead." Your father yowled, carrying the body back.

*my small torn ear flicks as i ask* "will Smallpaw be ok..?" *i lay beside Smallpaw as i look at him worried*

"It's rare for a cat to survive a coma. Almost no chance at all, but I can try to keep him alive."