Below, I have made a comment, suggestions, and or general feedback on your designs. If you have any questions, and or concerns please contact me privately. Otherwise, keep up the amazing work everyone!

@Poeticthoughts....I really like what you have done with your designs. You actually made two of the toughest species actually work. Nice job!

@Akira.....Those 3 species still elude me on to possibly make them work. You did very well. Admittingly though, I still do not like that stardust even if it looks good in that design.

@Dragon.....I have to agree with you on the Nytes.. Though your Nephs are really good though.

@Oreo....Oh gawd your design gives me the creeps...Those appendages are defiantly a creep factor. And the coloring make your Lune look like a real bug. Nice job!

@Trench....I can see why you would say what you say about your Aurleon design. The over all design of the leaf vein is not great. It reminds me more of a Giraffe spot then a leaf, if that makes sense. It doesn't go well really with anything. As for your Neph design...The wings remind me of the gates in "Neverending Story". Specifically the gate where Atreyu's inner self was tested by the double sphinxes. (Not that that told my age or anything there...lol) With that aside, your overall designs were really good. Way to go!

@Lala...Your design for the kelps is actually really elegant. It looks like they are going to a black tie affair. Very nice...As for the traits. I can see where you are getting at with that. They defiantly don't mesh well, and with the male you barely see the horn.

@Thunder.....With all your submissions, you defiantly have a few cute designs in there. Your coloring took away from the harshness of the trait flaws that you used so that they are not too terrible to look at. Very good work. It isn't just the traits that cause problems, it is based off coloring too and how well they mix. Too much one way, and it stands out like an eye sore...That is why you need to find that right balance. Good job!

@Arcane....Your Bulbs, though a bit monotoned...Actually do not look bad at all. You managed to pull off a very cute design with the disliked trait. The slight hint of yellowish green color is a very nice accented color. Nice work!

@Pickle......I had to blow up your designs to see them better, but you did a nice job. I like your hot chocolate design with the scales you dislike. It makes the scales look like marshmellows. Your Nephs were nice too.

@Ceru.....Your design was very interesting. Not sure about the horns color though.

@Viper.....You have some cute designs hon, though a bit monotoned. Try using some different colors with in your designs. Your lune though...(*Shudders*) I still do not like those arms. They are way too bug like! I don't mind bugs, but just something about the legs gives me the creeps. Good job!

i updated mine

Ah yes thank you (bonus points if you can guess which fandom i based this off of).. The horns were difficult but i tried to balance the colors out. Very limited on design with the Nytekrie.

Also on the masterpost you have two males for my design.

gaia online?

Thank you for letting me know. I will fix that shortly. :-) Sorry about that hon!

Nope! Good try though!

I don't like the arms either lol...

I have updated once again the entries thus far part 1 post. Please let me know if your updates are not present so I can make the corrections. I believe those I have.

Name: Sakura is enough ^^
ID Number: 127485
Why do you want to be a part of this group, or what do you hope to get from it:
Well I guess I just like designing them and thought it might be fun to join ^^
What is your favorite species of Sylesti: I love Zolnixis! :)

You are approved. You have until this Sunday at 5pm cst to submit your designs. Good luck, and I look forward to seeing what you have to offer!