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Dragongem23
Level 63
The Tender
Joined: 7/19/2017
Threads: 254
Posts: 25,229
Posted: 2/28/2021 at 9:26 PM
Post #241
Guess I'll be Critiquing your Baby Yoda, which is adorable
@Limor
First off I'd change the eyes to match his eyes which are dark brown. Then I'd make the ears a little more pink but keeping it neutral since the fluff affects the Garb. Personally I'd add more of those lovely grey/green shades into the genes. Also the green is lovely with the third gene but maybe the blue would work as there is that whole thing that happens at the force rocks would work too and add a subtle third color.
Original is on the Right, Critique is on the Left
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Maz Kanata Edited Version
Clone Troopers I did do 4 colors so i'll just being doing male designs (since they're all male)
Edited By Dragongem23 on 3/7/2021 at 8:06 PM.
Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
Threads: 179
Posts: 7,362
Posted: 2/28/2021 at 9:28 PM
Post #242
I'll have to opt out for this week, I've got a lot of schoolwork to do (we're studying Shakespeare aaa), sorry ^^"
July11
Level 62
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/12/2018
Threads: 1
Posts: 69
Posted: 3/1/2021 at 10:23 AM
Post #243
For your Maz Kanata design, I'd make the saddle more a dark brown color to match the photo. I'd change the saddle part of it to a darker green but it affects the underbelly and neck. Besides that I think it's pretty good.
Original --> Critique
The Mandalorian I don't know how well I did on this one, I haven't watched any Stars Wars what so ever.
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Edited By July11 on 3/1/2021 at 12:22 PM.
Noha
Level 70
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 11/2/2020
Threads: 43
Posts: 1,029
Posted: 3/1/2021 at 12:01 PM
Post #244
The Mandalorian critique
For this design, you should lighten up the cloak to more of a grey/silver to mimic the armor and lighten the skin a little more. The design is good but just add more lightness to it.
Original---->Modified
BB-8
Boba Fett
Original
Modifided
Jabba the Hutt
Darth Maul
C3-PO
Edited By Noha on 3/1/2021 at 3:37 PM.
Yello
Level 62
Joined: 1/9/2020
Threads: 15
Posts: 74
Posted: 3/1/2021 at 3:00 PM
Post #245
Boba Fett Critique
I noticed that although it was a nice design, it could've done much more to match the character. I'd recommend adding the little bits of red and gold that are evident in Boba Fett's design, not only does this make your design more recognizable as the character, but also adds a complexity the original design was lacking.
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Luggabeast
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Edited By Yello on 3/3/2021 at 9:14 AM.
Pokebellpuff
Level 73
The Perfectionist
Joined: 8/12/2020
Threads: 8
Posts: 179
Posted: 3/2/2021 at 12:50 AM
Post #246
I'm going to need to opt of D.C.U completely, I've been extremely busy lately with stuff and I've been falling out of Sylestia... I hope you understand.
Leah9531
Level 58
Fancy Pants
Joined: 2/10/2021
Threads: 68
Posts: 464
Posted: 3/2/2021 at 8:19 AM
Post #247
Darth vader:
This is my star wars theme
Frostfire
Level 69
Frosty Hands
Joined: 1/2/2021
Threads: 5
Posts: 794
Posted: 3/2/2021 at 1:35 PM
Post #248
I'll have to sit this one out, good luck to everyone else!
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 3/2/2021 at 5:20 PM
Post #249
Critique
First, I want to say that using the new Mork traits was such a great idea! It's refreshing to see designs that have tech or metal not being the Lup mech traits. I do disagree with your colors choices though. Imo, there is too much silver and not enough dark orange. These creatures are usually orange and blue, with slight to almost no hints of silver. I also suggest that in your next designs you try to fill all the color spots and try to move away from repeating colors. In my example I have changed some colors and traits and made the repeating colors more diverse.
Darth Revan
Darth Nihilus
Saroyan
Level 70
Trickster
Joined: 3/17/2020
Threads: 5
Posts: 249
Posted: 3/5/2021 at 3:53 AM
Post #250
Unfortunately, I need to opt out this week as well. School work is piling up like crazy and I need to get it done. I hope to be here for the next challenge tho :)
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