"Whoever this narrator you speak of... It is not me." She snarls. "Time to die!" She flicked a hand and the jaguar nearest to you bites you, sinking its fangs into your left arm. You hear a sickening crunch as bone snapped and pain shot up your arm as blood began spilling onto the ground.
IvyCat
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Posted: 1/14/2018 at 6:05 AM
Post #262
"So that's what you wish then?" Her knife descended on the raccoon, and a arc of blood followed, squirting out in a rainbow shape. You manage to grab a weapon, but it's a bone needle. She threw a bloody raccoon into your face.
She ran forward and plunged it into the girls eyes, crying. She wasd going to kill them all, whether it hurt herself or not.
(What chances? I'm sorry, but contrary to popular belief ivy does not have the power to see into the future or teleport. I didn't know I'd need the money. I didn't know I shouldn't walk into the alleyway. I didn't know that to save Diana my character needed to die.)
You still drew even more attention to yourself as you strode down the street. The people here looked the same as you, but they could somehow sense you were an outsider. Before you could go on any further, someone or something grabbed your arm and you were jerked to a stop.
(Where did she go? I said that I tucked her inside my jacket.)
Hello, hello, sorry, I dont know whats happening, why are you holding my arm like that? Phoenix let out a rush of words and turned around. Weird rude man put me here and I dont know what the heck Im supposed to be doing. She mumbled.
Aphelion
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Posted: 1/14/2018 at 7:31 AM
Post #264
(Sorry if I seemed offending or something. You could have asked her what she wanted/asked her to stop. I do not believe you can see into the future nor teleport, because nobody can do that. Plus, your character didn't need to die in order to save Diana. There are things the girl probably needs, and if you asked, she'd tell you, you'd get them for her, and all problems solved! Seriously, though. We're all humans, and we make mistakes (especially me, I make 20% of all mistakes all humans make added together), so I'm giving you another chance. Keep Diana's corpse with you and stuff will happen. Don't forget I added a new type of magic, and I added it for a reason. I guessed at this was going to happen, given your character's personality. Please don't hate me. You are not able to see into the future, and even if you are able to, I would try to stop you from seeing into the future. I probably would have made Diana die somewhere in the story too, and have her brought back to life. Stuff is planned, ok? Good. Let's be positive :D)
She screeched, blood jetting from the eye you'd stabbed the needle into, showering you in the filthy red liquid. Since you were close enough, it allowed her to stab her knife at you. Her blow glanced off of your ribs, cutting a bit deep, but not too deep to be a danger to you. She tackled you, and you two begin rolling around on the ground. Her eye kept gushing blood, and she kept trying to stab you, but missed a couple of times due to not being able to see when blood gets in her eyes.
Edited By Dragonrider1542 on 1/14/2018 at 8:55 AM.
Aphelion
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Posted: 1/14/2018 at 7:37 AM
Post #265
(She wasn't with you the moment you got teleported. As the dude from the beginning said, she will stay with you if she wants to. Art is your pet, yes, but she's a wild animal, and not fully tamed)
"Who are you!?" A woman was furiously grasping your wrist, holding on so hard that it felt like she was fracturing the bones in your wrist. "Are you a spy!? You're obviously not from around here." Her other hand was behind her back, and you don't know what she possibly could be holding.
(She wasn't with you the moment you got teleported. As the dude from the beginning said, she will stay with you if she wants to. Art is your pet, yes, but she's a wild animal, and not fully tamed)
"Who are you!?" A woman was furiously grasping your wrist, holding on so hard that it felt like she was fracturing the bones in your wrist. "Are you a spy!? You're obviously not from around here." Her other hand was behind her back, and you don't know what she possibly could be holding.
(Soo... she chose not to stay with me...?)
No! I just got teleported here by this man and he wouldnt tell me anything. I dont know what Im doing and Im alone. I have no friends at the moment and I really, really want to find some way to get home, but I dont know where I am and I dont have a map. I say, keeping eye contact with the woman.
Edited By Ghostwings20 on 1/14/2018 at 7:44 AM.
Aphelion
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Posted: 1/14/2018 at 7:58 AM
Post #267
"What man!? Are you crazy!? You must be a spy!" She glared right back at you and tugged on your hand, beginning to move down the street, drawing more people's attention. You hear them mutter "Spy" between each other. "Come with me, spy-girl!" She snarled, continuing to drag you down the street.
Xan held open the gate as you dashed inside and he closed it behind you. You were on a very nice gravel path that led through beautifully sculpted bushes and trees and to the door of the mansion.
"Come on, traveller. What is your name? Mine is Xan." Xan says, hurrying down the path.
Thank you, for already known information, Micah thought. Me? My names Micah. He introduced himself, slowly from a dash to a brisk walk, he didnt need to look too eager.
So, you live here? Must be pretty nice. He commented.
Aphelion
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Posted: 1/14/2018 at 8:09 AM
Post #269
"Ah, yes yes, Micah." Xan said in that peculiar way of his. "Come, come, be faster. And yes, I live here." He leads you up to the door, and just as you were about to reach out to knock, the door was swept open by two servants, revealing an elegantly furnished huge space, with carpets and plush chairs.
"Ah, yes yes, Micah." Xan said in that peculiar way of his. "Come, come, be faster. And yes, I live here." He leads you up to the door, and just as you were about to reach out to knock, the door was swept open by two servants, revealing an elegantly furnished huge space, with carpets and plush chairs.
Xan was slightly perculiar, and not just because of his strange name. Then, maybe, everyone here has names like that, at the them, his own name was strange. Abandoning the walk and trotting after Xan, Micah let out an astonished gasp at frivolity and elegance of the space. Yep. Definitely rich.
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