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Shimeree
Level 70
Fancy Pants
Joined: 2/23/2017
Threads: 6
Posts: 261
Posted: 3/8/2021 at 11:41 PM
Post #271
Critique:@Saroyan
To begin with, I absolutely adore all of your trait choices, and no matter how much I hate lucky dust it looks absolutely perfect on Full Moon. For Full Moon, I think your design is absolutely amazing, I cannot think of anything I would change given the opportunity. The dark black like the night sky, the light blue and gold accents, and the armour you picked perfectly represents the moon.
For Mischevious Vixen, I love the green you've chosen as an accent colour, as it adds such a nice pop of colour. However, The other colours you've chosen don't quite scream vixen to me. I feel like you could absolutely make the darker colours a little more red/orange instead of red/brown, and maybe even make the pastel red/pink more of a cream colour. I've made all the colours a bit more orange, but you could definitely go even further with the orange if you wanted.
For your Rainforest Serenade design, I think your design is absolutely gorgeous, and the colours look so pretty together. However, I don't particularly think the theme of your design. When I think of rainforests, I think of lush, deep greens, with hints of yellow and pink. I'd either change the name of your design to something like "Floral Forest Serenade" or simply change M2 into a darker green. You could also tweak the yellow on the icicle wings into a pink, or even the tan to a very dark green if you wanted, but I think the yellow and tan look lovely so I have kept them in my example.
For Devil's Rose, I think that you've got your design spot on! It definitely feels like a devilish rose! The only thing I would change is make the light orange in G3 to a light red to add to more of the rose vibe.
Critique:@Limor
Your designs are absolutely stunning! For most of them, I cant think of a single thing I would change! Black Ice has the beautiful black and light blue contrast, Pomegranate salsa has the gorgeous colours plus the stunning combo of the Tribal Mask with the light yellow, Bloodtwig Dogwood has a wonderful combination of traits and colours that make the entire design feel like the rings and speckles of the inside of a tree, and Bed Lurker gives me such a strong nostalgia because it reminds me so much of the One Eyed One Horned Flying Purple People Eater (although I dont know if thats intentional or not). The only design I have problems with is Black Eyed Susan. I'm not too sure what exactly the design is supposed to be based off, if its just the name you thought would be cool or if its based off the flower of the same name, or even something completely different. If you have a specific inspiration, a reference picture for that one in particular would be nice. Since I'm not too positive on your inspirations, I am going to assume its based on the flower. I would personally try to incorporate a little green into your design to represent the stem/leaves of the flower, as I am not the best designer I have changed G1 to a very dark green, but I am sure other traits could be changed if you believe the green would go somewhere else. Finally, I also changed the eye colour to a dark brown/black to represent the center of the flower, as it changes the gem colour on the armour as well as the eyes.
My Design:Chocolate Delight
Critiqued Design:
Edited By Shimeree on 3/9/2021 at 5:29 PM.
July11
Level 62
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/12/2018
Threads: 1
Posts: 69
Posted: 3/9/2021 at 10:39 AM
Post #272
Critique:
I think you did a wonderful job designing your Nytekrie. It reminds of the Lindor milk and white truffles. The only thing I would change is making C1 brown a richer, redder color. I would switch around the original C1 color to G1, and the original G1 color to G2. For extra flare, I would add the Moon tiara and make it a dark brown-red color.
Original:
Modified:
My Designs:
Passing Constellations
Modified Passing Constellations:
Peppermint Hot Cocoa
Chaffinch
Bloody Night
Edited By July11 on 3/10/2021 at 10:45 AM.
Noha
Level 70
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 11/2/2020
Threads: 43
Posts: 1,029
Posted: 3/9/2021 at 11:02 AM
Post #273
~Passing Constellations~
This is a very nice design, I would just suggest to increase the saturation of the moon ruins, stardust and fairy enchantment. They just look a little dull compared to the rest of the design. Otherwise, great job!
Original------>Modified
~Beachside~
~Out of Time~
~Cosmos~ ~Modified~
~Moring Seaside~
~Spotify~
~Blooming Love~
~Ocean Blush~
~Bloodbath~
Edited By Noha on 3/13/2021 at 11:53 PM.
Noha
Level 70
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 11/2/2020
Threads: 43
Posts: 1,029
Posted: 3/9/2021 at 12:06 PM
Post #274
@Limor
I forgot to ping you in the previous post
Yello
Level 62
Joined: 1/9/2020
Threads: 15
Posts: 74
Posted: 3/9/2021 at 1:43 PM
Post #275
I'm really sorry but I have to opt out of this challenge!
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 3/10/2021 at 11:20 PM
Post #276
Halfway through the week! Get those entries in!
Edited By Limor on 3/10/2021 at 11:21 PM.
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 3/11/2021 at 10:29 AM
Post #277
I have to opt out, PT this week has absolutely killed me, and I've been too tired to design well. I also need to do schoolwork as the next two weeks are the end of my 8 week class. I need to be on top of everything so I pass. Including writing a paper, and then a 5 page informational essay for English. :'(
Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
Threads: 179
Posts: 7,362
Posted: 3/11/2021 at 12:47 PM
Post #278
--Critique for Noha--
I absolutely love your Spotify design - can i just say - and I do love your Cosmos design too, though I'd like to say one thing about it. The C3 and the A2 are both a very nice navy blue, though you can't really see it through the design. I'd suggest perhaps boldening it? For example (original --> edited):
Other than that, it's amazing ^^
~Cold as Ice~
~Break the Dawn~
Edited By Miroh on 3/11/2021 at 7:35 PM.
Startingle
Level 65
The Perfectionist
Joined: 8/19/2020
Threads: 16
Posts: 345
Posted: 3/11/2021 at 7:31 PM
Post #279
Critique for Miroh.
I love both of your designs but the first design, 'Cold As Ice', is nagging at one of my pet peeves. The bright/neon cyan is...well, a bit bright, at least to me, so maybe trying a more faded blue would help? So I changed all of the 00FFFF(bright cyans.) to 63C2C2(a bit more muted blue.).
Original-
Modified-
(Only had time to make one design)
Plague Bird Nytekrie
Original-
Modified-
Old Scroll Nytekrie
Death's Bird Nytekrie
Candied Cake Nytekrie
Mosaic Wall Nytekrie
Star Sky Clearing Nytekrie
Edited By Startingle on 3/12/2021 at 9:30 PM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 3/11/2021 at 11:32 PM
Post #280
please make your critique a bit longer :)
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