No changes needed!

Although you did say you want critiques, so I think the way his head attached to his shoulder looked a bit off? I don't believe I'll do better myself though, it definitely looks like a tough pose!

Sounds good to me :)
Ty for all the details and specifications


Nice :D

Yeah, I tried moving his head a few different ways and just decided to leave it how I did ^^;
ty for your feedback :)

I'm happy to hear you think my art is good c:
I hope I can deliver then x)

Thanks so much!

Yes, this OC is the one I want art for, if I understand what you're asking?
Here's the profile I made her (I don't use Toyhouse or anything)

Phoenix

Full name: Phoenicia Toshiko Xiang

Nickname(s): Phoenix, Toshi

Age: 16

Aliases:

Gender: Female

Personality: Shy and introverted but not antisocial, extremely loyal and close to her few friends, she's actually quite sarcastic, witty, and adventurous if you get to know her but is very pessimistic.

Strengths/Abilities: Agility - can dodge almost anything she sees coming, extremely fast reflexes and you know, agile in general. Leaves a streak of blue when she moves.
Musical Manipulation - If she makes a song (singing works but she prefers using instruments), she can hypnotize people, send out a sonic pulse or a high-pitched sound that temporarily incapacitates people who hear it (and shatters glass, possibly)
She is a fast thinker and learner, and can keep a clear head in stressful situations. Loyal almost to a fault. Good at planning ahead but doesn't always stick to those plans.

Weaknesses: May speak before thinking, always sees the worst in things, generally mistrusting if she doesn't know you well. Headstrong and stubborn, she won't listen to reason if she is passionate or thinks something is right/is for the greater good.

Physical Description: On the shorter side, long dark brown hair, greyish-blue eyes

Likes: Birds, music (violin and piano), reading, math, rainy days, adventure, exploring new places

Hates: Large crowds, being the center of attention, lots of noise/movement around her, chaos, leadership

Typical Outfit: a red scarf (usually), light jacket (usually) over white or dark short sleeved shirt, knee length jeans, black fingerless gloves, and dark blue hi-tops.

Quote(s): There goes my sanity.

Book: Valencia/Candela

Other:

Thank you for the information, with what you've said/mentioned here I'll try to figure something :)

A heads up, I bought a new desk, and dismantled my old one. I still have to build it, so my monitor's sitting right on the ground being uncomfortable as hell!

I'll just show you the rough sketch:


Zach's jumping down from a higher area, one of the scarf hands are balled up in a fist, IDK what to do with the other one!

I'd be happy to do both, they both look so cute ^-^ is there any pose or action you want either one to be doing?

^{Oh dear, I do wish you the best building yourself that new desk
I can't imagine it's easy as dealing with a laptop in the same scenario}

It's looking cool :D
Well if it helps you at all somehow, the arms are a completely different character who does things independently from Zach ^^
(it's not important for that character's teeth to be in view if that is becoming a handicap)
(also something I find a bit interesting is that your piece looks like the unused hand kindove looks like it's holding the edge of a cliff they are just kindove dangling over)

I really appreciate that you're drawing anything at all :)