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Duckymomo
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:54 AM
Post #21
Yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!
Lunalamoone
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:57 AM
Post #22
can't see the design sketches on a school chromebook...
Ayalaatreides
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:57 AM
Post #23
Loving the amount of detail on their feathers!!! My one critique is that I feel like the male's pose is more static in this sketch than the current pose. It looks a little less lively, in my opinion. If the pose had a little more movement in it, I think it would be perfect.
Ethan78790
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM
Post #24
Maybe make the head slightly bigger maybe?
Aerii
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM
Post #25
Oh my goodness, I am in love! I mean, I loved them before, but I love them even more now. *screams* I really can't wait until this happens. *happy dance*
Kalores
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM
Post #26
Okay, I am super happy with the concept so far! I'm really looking forward to seeing how they get developed from here! :D
Tableleg
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM
Post #27
Those are adorable! Almost makes me actually like the species (nothing against the design Im just not a fan of the breed itself)
Cyradis4
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 12:04 PM
Post #28
OMG so cute! Love the babies and the female.
I have to agree with the others on the male, though. He's not quite right. I'm not good with crits, but I'll try to say what looks weird to me:
- The chest is really weak, weaker than the girls. The wing-arms attach there and across the back, shouldn't it be pretty deep and muscly for flying?
- The tail seems to be as thick as the body. That may be because of the thin chest, I don't know...
- Tail feathers are getting lost in the head feathers. Coloring will help, but I think a tail position shift fixes the problem?
Hope this helps!
C4.
Savynn
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Posted: 9/10/2019 at 12:06 PM
Post #29
I'm so happy that these really still contain their essence! I've always loved that they look part owl and part dino raptor. The hatchlings are adorable!
Edit: I see what the above post means when talking about the lack of chest for the male and also the position of the tail feathers. He could use a bit of tinkering.
I have to agree with the others on the male, though. He's not quite right. I'm not good with crits, but I'll try to say what looks weird to me:
- The chest is really weak, weaker than the girls. The wing-arms attach there and across the back, shouldn't it be pretty deep and muscly for flying?
- The tail seems to be as thick as the body. That may be because of the thin chest, I don't know...
- Tail feathers are getting lost in the head feathers. Coloring will help, but I think a tail position shift fixes the problem?
Hope this helps!
C4.
I agree with what's been said here ^^ Other than that: They are so adorable!!! ToT *w* <3 I can't wait to see the final design!
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