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Kittyauthor
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 2:28 PM
Post #571
The internet gobbled my last post. Gobble gobble.
Anyhow, the story sounds very interesting and I'd live in Rescue Bots. And a joke about overpowered characters in regards to me going to Rescue Bots, but I can't remember the joke.
Hiraeth
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 2:29 PM
Post #572
The internet, gobbler of jokes. Gobble gobble. :)
idk what fictional universe I'd go to.
Kittyauthor
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 2:31 PM
Post #573
It always happens on Firefox to Sylestia whenever I go outside of the house, so now I'm on DuckDuckGo mobile browser.
Sp00ns
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 5:43 PM
Post #574
Oooo, I like it, although the "I learn I'm not the only one who suffers" bit seems more like he's pushing back the way he feels due to 'others having it worse', which would cause problems down the line. Was that intentional? How do you plan on developing the Arc, like what are the hurdles he's going to jump through to reach this conclusion? =>= to clarify I love the story idea, I'm more-or-less asking for spoilers lol
edit: I just realized that being here has developed the way I write SO MUCH, like- before I'd just go through and think things as I went, but now I actually create plans and give my characters depth instead of just plopping down their personality and fears and all that gibber-jabber. I think of their backstories first, since that would develop those traits into what they become in perhaps the final chapter of the story
Edited By Amaniii on 12/7/2020 at 5:48 PM.
Hiraeth
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 6:13 PM
Post #575
Heh. Idk. I've discovered he's half-nightborn (aka vampire). His past is a right mess - his family (Lewin; may change idk) worked with a secret branch of said corrupt government before it got corrupt. His father backed out of a deal and that's why his family's dead and fortune is gone. So he's angry, but can't get back at those who took from him, so he takes it out on others and mostly does mercenary work and stuff like that. He meets other members of a resistance (Sera, Wren, and other characters) who convince him there's a way to bring down evil people! and idk. Honestly I don't plan *anything* out so none of this will probably happen lol. But yeah, he's a one man pity party. Think grumpy anime side protagonist, but less angst
Sp00ns
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 6:54 PM
Post #576
REMINDS ME OF GUTS FROM BERSERK
"A classic example of a tragic hero, Guts began his life from death as he was born from the corpse of his mother. Being trained as a soldier literally from birth, his life has seen little more than one battlefield after the next. A lifetime of killing has given Guts a "swing sword first, ask questions later" attitude and his heart hardens further with each comrade that is lost."
Hiraeth
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 7:12 PM
Post #577
Ehh, Kirin taught himself most of his fighting stuff. He uses a rapier-like sword. As a noble, the most useful thing he knew how to do was talk smooth. x)
Uh, kind of related, but have you read the genshin impact manga? if so, Kirin's like a mix between Kaeya and Diluc (absolute husbando). ehem. but yeah xD If you haven't, ignore that whole thing sdkjfbskjdf
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 7:22 PM
Post #578
I have not read that one, I mostly watch the anime rather than read the manga, although I did read the entirety of the fairy tail manga-- I was far more intrigued while reading it than watching it tbh.
Hiraeth
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 7:33 PM
Post #579
There's an anime??? :O
Sp00ns
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Posted: 12/7/2020 at 8:33 PM
Post #580
I have no idea if there is a Genshin Impact anime series.
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