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Aphelion
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 9:37 AM
Post #51
Are we allowed to comment on the story here?
Just a quick question: Is the Lupora pack structured like a wolf pack? Or is it just consisted of alphas and omegas?
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 9:40 AM
Post #52
Yes, you are allowed to comment, give suggestions (though I may not always use them), and ask questions.
It is structured like the basic wolf pack, with alphas, omegas, and betas.
The Alphas are all related closely, like a real pack, so that their bloodline will always be alpha. The betas are tough like Ice and Dirt. The Omegas are the hippies. See Lupora pack in post one for more details.
Edited By Nafariaandulin on 10/6/2017 at 9:40 AM.
Aphelion
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 9:49 AM
Post #53
(I do research on wolf packs so I fun need more info XD)
I was just confused about the structure, that's all. Because in wolf packs, there are only two Alphas, the male and his mate.
Would it be okay with you if I go in my 'editor' mode and make suggestions and stuff?
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 9:54 AM
Post #54
Umm... Sure?
This isn't exactly like a wolf pack, however. It's a lupora pack. They have heirs. So any children of the Alpha couple + the Healer lupora are Alphas. At the age of 5 lupora years, the luporas will take a physical test which will decide their place in the pack. The ones who preformed with vigour are the Betas, those who perform with slightly less vigour, but more control are the Omegas.
Aphelion
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 9:55 AM
Post #55
Ah, so you used the names from a wolf pack but the structure actually has nothing to do with a wolf pack?
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 10:01 AM
Post #56
It does somewhat, they have a level of hierarchy. The betas fight, the alphas lead, the omegas calm them down. Pups eat first, the alpha female teaches the wolves to fight and hunt, so it's somewhat similar.
Aphelion
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 10:07 AM
Post #57
Well, if you say so. So the betas equate to the Warriors in a real wolf pack, and yeah...
Also, in Latin, "Gratias tibi" isn't complete. The correct form is "Gratias tibi ago" which means "I give thanks to you" You could ignore this, or if you want, I could make sure the Latin in the story is grammatically correct. (Yes, I study Latin as a fourth language)
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 10:12 AM
Post #58
I'm only on year one.... I is a newb. I speak French, Scottish Gaelic, Spanish, and American though. Lysie says 'American' isn't a language. I beg to differ!
All their weird words...
trousers = pants
pants/knickers = underwear
till = cash register
tube = subway
etc...
If you could translate the Latin that would be helpful.
Aphelion
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 10:16 AM
Post #59
I can translate the Latin for you, but how did you get the Latin up there without knowing what it means?
Also, American isn't a language. American English is, though.
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 10:17 AM
Post #60
...Google translate. It's easier than me stressing over writing a simple sentence correctly for five hours.
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