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Aphelion
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Posted: 10/6/2017 at 10:32 AM
Post #61
Lol okay! Most of your Latin grammar is correct... Just saying, I'm not an expert since I just started learning, but I try.
So:
Tu scis quibus occurrens Prismatic consilio est hodie?
This wouldn't work with a question mark. So "said" .means "You know" and it's in the indicative voice, which is stating a fact. Also, the "Tu" in the front isn't necessary. I would use "quibum" instead of "quibus" because quibus is in the nominative case, and if you're asking someone do they know something ABOUT where something is happening, the "where" would be in ablative case. "Occurrens" doesn't even look like a Latin word XD. At least not a verb. The rest looks okay. Btw Consilio does not mean council.
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 10/10/2017 at 11:35 AM
Post #62
I added to the story.
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 11/9/2017 at 9:56 PM
Post #63
Added again! Sorry for the wait.
Goldenfeather74
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Posted: 11/16/2017 at 3:31 PM
Post #64
This story is so funny. Krinadon's pants XD
Just a question though. So I know that (blanking on name) is supposed to be like Moriarty but if everyone knows what his quest is its kind of awkward for him to keep showing up without fighting Shildr. Like he just murdered someone and they are all sitting on chairs. Shouldn't he be detained? Well, I don't think the Council would think of that they seem kind of scatterbrained.
Also, did you get Shildr from Ashildr from Doctor Who?
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 12/10/2017 at 5:48 PM
Post #65
Ultramis is a legendary being and the spirit of chaos. Whether evil or not, he is needed. Therefore they have to keep him on the Prismatic Council (to Rhanir's great annoyance.) You really can't detain an immortal being of massive power. He will fight Shildr eventually, but not yet. Right now he's sort off a source of annoyance to the lupora. The council is based off of the Olympians of Greek Mythology. It's one big dysfunctional family.
Shildr is his own name, not like Ashildr from Doctor Who.
Edited By Nafariaandulin on 1/6/2018 at 11:07 PM.
Goldenfeather74
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Posted: 12/11/2017 at 2:57 PM
Post #66
Ah okay. If he's immortal and needed, what will happen if Shildr kills him?
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 12/17/2017 at 11:27 AM
Post #67
He'll eventually be reborn.
Goldenfeather74
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Posted: 12/17/2017 at 11:32 AM
Post #68
Oh okay makes sense
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 12/19/2017 at 8:05 PM
Post #69
Hello everybody! Not dead!
Nafariaandulin
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Posted: 1/6/2018 at 11:08 PM
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Sequel by Sketched is in progress! I'm so proud! T-T
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