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Limor
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Posted: 4/22/2019 at 8:23 PM
Post #721
hmm yeah, the design is just loosly based on the image, was thinking of how the ocean gets somewhat greenish during storms, so like stormy sea before tsunami?
Though it could be toned down a tad
Eyelashviper
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Posted: 4/23/2019 at 5:55 AM
Post #722
For the Summer stars Ny'vene... add a bit/ a bit more of purple, pink and blue because thats what I think a galaxy looks like (Just opinion, if you don't agree just keep it how it is)
Edited By Eyelashviper on 4/23/2019 at 5:55 AM.
Annoyed
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Joined: 11/2/2014
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Posts: 860
Posted: 4/23/2019 at 10:17 AM
Post #723
In which I ramble and probably give vague advice. They look wonderful as is, so you can totally disregard anything I say :P
Daffodil Aerdini
Possibly make the yellows a bit brighter and change the M1: Color to yellow because that's the 'flower' part? This is just me messing around with it design to see how it looks, though switching out the EC sadly removes that lovely deep green...
Original vs Tweaked
Tropical Dusk
The Tropical Dusk feels like it's missing another color, like a dark blue or something, but at the same time I don't know how you would add it without drastically changing the design overall... As a side note, the design reminds me more of fruit punch instead of dusk but it's probably just my dislike of pink showing (sorry)
Clear-Sunny-Blue Skies Bulbori
Since there's emphasis on clear/sunny/blue that means the sun is gonna be there as a yellow and it's gonna be bright (not really), but the yellows could be a tad brighter? Though the lighter yellows give a better impression of lack of clouds and pale sunbeams.
Original vs Tweaked.
Reflecting Moonlight Lupora
It's just my color preference and color association, but the orange and yellow throws the whole moonlight theme off for me. I usually think of moonlight as blue/white/grey/black, so it makes me wonder where/ what the moon is reflecting off to make the orange and yellow. I would suggest a rename to fit the design colors a bit better (Glowing Streetlight Lupora sounds nice to me, but it also sounds weird at the same time, whoops).
Tsunami Bouy
I agree that the torquoise jives the wrong way, I think if it was tinted a bit more blue it would help. Also I think the M2: could have a bit brighter red and toss in some white if your trying to match the picture to the t. The eyecolor clashes a bit, but somehow works, so I just messed with it to see what it would look like.
Original vs Tweaked (no idea what I'm doing :B) Random side thought, the colors + the armor remind me of a lobster for some reason lol
Humpback Whale
Looking at photos I think you could make the colors a bit darker leaning towards black. But they look fine as is!
Summer Stars/ Milky Way/ Orion's belt
I feel like there's too much white but it's probably just the traits shown. I think you could add more blues, blacks- and purple's to counter it. Also where's the red coming from? I'm guessing it's from a red star in the Orions belt constellation, but I normally don't think of red and space being together.
Calming-Gentle Waves/Bubbling Seafoam
If your going to choose seafoam as the theme name you might need some white, not sure really, they look really nice as it.
Wallflower Zolnixi
(assuming the flower not the term) I think you could have more orange? The tan is throwing me off a little and the photos I got had a more orangey look than tan
Limor
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Posted: 4/24/2019 at 7:41 PM
Post #724
Possible Summer Themed
Please critique Daffodil Aeridini
For the Coral Reef Griffi, I would suggest toning the green down a little. I can see what you were trying to go for, but it throws me off a little. I would suggest either making it into a teal, or maybe just toning down the saturation. I have not tested what it would look like, but I think it would look less cluttered.
Limor
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The Kind-Hearted
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Posted: 4/25/2019 at 5:49 PM
Post #728
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Freki
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 7/29/2018
Threads: 14
Posts: 927
Posted: 4/25/2019 at 8:50 PM
Post #729
Yeah, that green's a lot less distracting. It looks great!
Sunflora
Level 71
Ghost Writer
Joined: 6/6/2018
Threads: 10
Posts: 536
Posted: 4/29/2019 at 10:15 PM
Post #730
Critiques for possible summer themes please.
Jungle Flower Aeridini
Eternal Embers Aurleon
Happy Coconut Ferrikki
Pine Forest Griffi
Glow Worm Kelpari
Peach Cobbler Lunemara
Night Lantern/Kerosene Lamp Nephini
Moon of Jupiter Ny'vene
Blue Leviathan Sylvorpa
Cool Cucumber/ Cucumber Water Zolnixi
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