I'ts gorgeous! Great job on this one guys.

Ahh, your artwork is amazing, I envy it so~ I love the wings and the claws on them, I don't think I would change anything even if I could. I can't wait to see them with mutation and such as well!

I do have a minor problem with the noses on the hatchlings since they seem slightly more cartoonish than the adult noses, but honestly it's not something you have to change.

am i the only one who looked at the adults and thought 'oh carp they gave velocirapers wings'?

over all very cool but the babys look a little chuby

I love how the hatchlings look like they're playing/fighting with each other it's too cute ouo

I loved them all but I liked the adult in the top right hand corner.

These are fantastic revamp previews! I'm so excited. I can finally love the Ny'vene <3

I have no critques or suggestions. They are adorable :D

Love the upgraded art on these pets! I may have to get a couple when this update is complete.

yus! much ny'vene luv!

*is gonna have tons of ny'vene that will need re-genning*

In general, I am liking the revamp a lot! They both look amazing, and I like the improvements in their anatomy, and the posture for the male looks a lot better too.

However, a couple of nitpicks:

The female's head shape doesn't really match with the male's, from what I can see.

This is what it looks like to me, and from the heads alone I would guess they are different species of wyverns.
I drew over the female's head with another head that resembles the male's head much more in shape, at least to me.

And here it is compared with the current female's head:


Another part is the wing further away from the body looks quite awkward, but to fix that, the entire wing might need to be redrawn, which is a fair amount of work.

I also find the hatchling's noses are too rounded, and the placement of the female's eyes are a bit off. But that is minor.