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Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 6/3/2019 at 8:14 PM
Post #821
Critiques? Be harsh,
Iron Cave Aurleon
Underground River Bulbori
Gold Ingot/Gold Vein Draeyl
Kyanite Faelora
Cavern Glowworm Ferrikki
Cave Painting Kelpari
Fruit Bat Luffox
Turquoise Gems Lunemara
Rose Quartz Lupora
Glowing Moss Morkko
Blind Salamander/Axolotl Nephini
Fading Sunlight Nytekrie
Amethyst Qitari
Cavern Skylight Sylvorpa
Cavern Rat Vulnyx
Glowing Mushroom Zolnixi
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 6/3/2019 at 8:15 PM
Post #822
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Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 6/3/2019 at 8:16 PM
Post #823
above
Twinkleunicorn
Level 60
Stocking Stuffer
Joined: 8/17/2018
Threads: 119
Posts: 3,199
Posted: 6/4/2019 at 9:42 AM
Post #824
Owo nice
Orcastration
Level 74
Fishy
Joined: 11/1/2018
Threads: 318
Posts: 33,448
Posted: 6/4/2019 at 1:10 PM
Post #825
(For the Friday night thingy)
Punk Petal nephini (I did this for the fest design lol-made it in winter, and jus used it for fest. I like th efemale better tho)
Edited By Orca2Whale on 6/4/2019 at 1:15 PM.
Freki
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 7/29/2018
Threads: 14
Posts: 927
Posted: 6/4/2019 at 2:56 PM
Post #826
Okay, from the start, I will say that I really like your designs, but the pictures you chose for them or based them off of do not match with the colors you chose for most of them (I do not know if I was a bit to harsh :p)
For the Iron Cave Aurleon, I would suggest using more red tones, especially in the lighter colors, I feel it would look more like the image.
For the Underground River Bulbori, I am sorry, but it does not look like the picture at all. I can see the river in the bulbori, but given the reference, it just looks strange. If you are trying to base it off the image, I would suggest using more turquoise like colors, and also maybe through in a rusty brown. If you were not trying to base it off the picture, I would suggest using at least one brighter blue, or a blue gray to make the design a bit more interesting.
For the Cavern Glowworm Ferriki, again, I do not know if you were trying to base it off the picture or what, it is in the same boat as the bulbori. If you were trying to base it on the picture, I would suggest making the green and the yellow more blueish, and the black coloring have little spots of more rust colored things.
For the Glowing Moss Morkko, it is in the same boat as the Ferriki and the Bulbori, I do not know if you are going for the picture or not, but either way, I think my advice is the same. I would suggest adding a black color, probably on C1, mainly to signify the darkness and give a bit of contrast. I would make at least one of the greens much brighter. You have some blue greens, and I think that is fine, but I would suggest choosing one or the other, teal or bright green, as it changing does not really work for me.
For the Nytekrie, I really like the colors, but the image throws me off, mainly because it does not have any golden highlights like the Nytekrie does. I would suggest either changing the image, or changing the golden highlights to a light blue to signify the image.
For the Cavern Skylight Sylvapora, I really like the design, and I would suggest you either find a different image, or just get rid of the image as I feel the design is good but the picture throws it off.
For the Zolnixi, I would suggest changing the yellow to a more orange color to match the image more, but also to provide contrast. I would also suggest dampening the bright blue and make it into a more purpleish blue.
WickedImpulse
Level 75
Crystalline Cleaver
Joined: 1/27/2018
Threads: 50
Posts: 534
Posted: 6/5/2019 at 6:47 PM
Post #827
Username: Seaglass!
Nickname : Sea is fine!
Favorite Sylesti Species: Ryori
Favorite Color(s): All. lol
Amount of Designs: 60~
Why You Want to Join : I don't actually know if my designs are good looking to others, so i'd like a place to get some feedback!
Sunflora
Level 71
Ghost Writer
Joined: 6/6/2018
Threads: 10
Posts: 536
Posted: 6/7/2019 at 2:52 PM
Post #828
Design Critique Friday
Cursed Relam Aeridini
Ghostly Spectre Aurleon
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 6/10/2019 at 1:36 AM
Post #829
So if this is themed design it will need some more color variance, on it's own it does get kind of murky still and could use some more contrast. I'd also suggest throwing in some orangy-reds.
and some more 6v examples...
and traitless..
I made these changes to make it more 'flowery' though if thats not what your going for disregard this!
Edited By Limor on 6/10/2019 at 1:36 AM.
Orcastration
Level 74
Fishy
Joined: 11/1/2018
Threads: 318
Posts: 33,448
Posted: 6/10/2019 at 1:41 AM
Post #830
Kidna going for a punkish flower thing.
Hard to explain tho ;ol
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