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More color variety on the Griffi and Ligh, saturate the Aeri a bit, and maybe more grays on the Neph?

1st things 1st, you gotta fill all the color slots! If you intend to do a white color for anything, I suggest using an off white.

2nd things 2nd, a lot of your designs are very pretty and aestheticly pleasing with my favorites being your Ryori, Lupora, and Bulbori. Now with that out of the way, let's start!

Dying Forest Faelora
At first sight, your Faelora doesn't exactly say "Dying Forest." I would add some greyish brown colors and some dark green for a eeeie, decaying effect. Here is a suggestion for some inspiration!


Wild Mushroom Luffox
I really like the colors for this Luffox and you are on the right track. However, there is just a tad too much yellow. To counteract that yellow, replace it with some shades of brown.


Dusty Cobweb Lunemara
This design is a bit risky to do since it is a mostly white color palette but I really do think it can be pulled off of done right. I suggest adding some very light browns for a pop of color!


Frosted Maple Tree Qitari
This design feels more wintery than fall but it is still pretty to look at. However, I feel like it would look better if red was the base with white/blue on the top (Like the Frost is frosted the maple leaves).


Extra Notes:
- The Aurleon looks more like a general culmination of the squash category so maybe correspond it's name with squashes as a whole

-I wanna see just a tad more orange on the Lupora. Just a tad.

Good luck, Lonefox. Hopefully they will pick one of yours *o*

So.....I saw both versions of your Candied Yam Qitari design and I really loved both of them and I know you can't submit them both. Then I had this crazy thought, what if you combined the two of them to make this?



Just a suggestion I thought you'd might like ^^

would these be good for projects?
1.seaside puff

2. acid spill puff

3.sunset puff

4.galaxy puff

5.wild fire puff

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For the Wolfs Bane Griffi, I would suggest adding green to it, mainly because I think all the purple is overwhelming, and I think some green could make it more interesting.
For the Caramel Apple Vulnyx, I think the green is a bit jarring, but I do not really know how to fix it :/
I really like your designs, especially the Mulled Wine Nytekries!

Seaside Puffadore:

Pretty nice for a first try, but try out some some different variations to show different times.

Example:

Orange, Yellow, pink = sunset, sunrise

Your version seems to work best with noon-late morning time range.

Acid Spill Puffadore:

Like I said in gen chat, I think there is too much yellow.

Acid/radiation is usually pictured as being greenish, so try to balance out the green/yellow.

The bone/undead muts work very well, however.


Sunset Puffadore:

This one actually works well, but it (along with wildfire) could be confused for something else.

I've had my designs confused before when someone mistook my permafrost morkko design for a spring valley.


Galaxy Puffadore:

This puff looks fine to me....


Wildfire Puffadore:


Just like with Sunset Puffadore, this could be confused for something else.

It's even more apparent here, because the color scheme could make it get mistaken for a pumpkin


That's just my two cents, choose whichever you like.