lol i get my mom mad all the time when i correct her xD

In case anyone hasn't read it yet, my fanfiction updated today, and I might be writing another part tonight, so if you'd like to be added to the pinglist let me know. Comments and such are appreciated;
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=29267

New prompt is now up as well

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I'll work on it later WIP!!!!!!

The last thing I saw were his eyes. Green, bright luminous eyes, my eyes, the eyes that only he had, full of love.

"No" he whimpered, covering his face with his paws. "You can't leave me...Starlight. What about our pups? I can't raise them alone!"
"You'll make an excellent father" I huffed, my breathing ragged and my voice scratchy.
"And...and you'll make an excellent mother!" he exclaimed, hopefully but with doubt.
"No" I whispered. "I'm not going to recover." I coughed, pain seizing my chest.
"You will! You're going to get better...." he paced around, back and forth. "You have to! I don't know what to do without you!"
I smiled. "They won't have me, but they will have you."
"Fine! Maybe they can carry on without you, but I can't." he choked up, "I can't. I need you."
"If you love me then you'll let me go, be happy. The last thing I want to see when I-I-I" my throat constricted, a lump formed in my throat not allowing me to speak. "when I...die is your mad face."
"Of course I'm upset! You're giving up! What about Pine, Moon and Thorn?! What about me?" his face was a mask of anguish and anger.
I took a deep, shuddering breath. "They'll be fine, you will too." I closed my eyes, already beginning to feel myself slipping away. "Goodbye, Oak. Take care of them for me, take care of yourself."
He desperately prodded my muzzle, but it felt distant....so far.
"Starlight!" he howled. "No, don't leave!!!"
And with that, I gracefully slipped out of my body and walked straight ahead. I touched Oak's ear tip, "I'll never forget you, my love."
He pushed and buried his nose into my old body. His legs gave under from under him. "I'll never find anyone like you. I'll love you forever."
"As will I." I repeated, "As will I"



" I need to." I pleaded. "Please, Leader Thistle."
"You have to let go of your past life. Look to the future not the past." He gazed up into the sky and smiled. "You need to let go. They'll all be here, sooner or later."
"But I must check on them NOW."
"No, you shouldn't. Think about the consequences."
"The consequences of seeing my pups? The consequences of seeing Oak?" I asked, incredulously.
"Yes."
"there aren't any." In a sudden desperation and anger I bared my teeth at him and growled. He blinked at me. He eyed me as one might eye a bratty little pup, then he dipped his head.
"All right, you have my permission to venture into the living world. But just remember, you've been warned."
I jumped up and down and up and down...until the portal appeared behind him.
I raced into it at break-neck speed the last thing I heard was him telling me to come back, but it was too late.


I landed head-first and watched in awe as a leaf went straight through my nose.
I raced to where my old home was and stopped when I saw three young-adult wolves
"Pine! Look at what I caught!" Thorn lifted his rabbit high into the air. "I'm going to go give it to Ma."
Thorn snorted. "I could do better than that anyday!"
"But you didn't do better. You caught absolutely nothing."
"I usually do."
"Whatever. Bye. I'm taking this to Ma"
I walked over to take the prey that Thorn had caught me. They used to call me Mama, why do they say Ma now? He walked right through me.
"Wait! I'm right here! Turn around!" I called to him. He kept walking towards home. ""Thorn!"
I followed him him and slid into my former home, and as he approached a wolf I knew.
Amber. She was grooming herself with long, soothing strokes. Thorn dropped the rabbit right in front of her muzzle. "Look at what I brought back for you."
"Why, than you, my sweetie." she nuzzled his head.
Of course. I died, of course they wouldn't remember me. They replaced me. I knew that, but still.....how could my own pups forget about me?
Tail drooping, I made my way towards Oak's den. Seeing him would cheer me up. He greeted me with warm, sparkling eyes. They were so different. Instead of having grief-ridden heavy eyes, now he was happy.
"My darling," I whispered, "I finally found you." Now I could stay here forever with Oak, and I would watch over him. In a sudden flurry of fur and dust, he zoomed right through me and crashed into a sleek, light-gray wolf with amber eyes. The adopted mother of my pups.
"Oak!" she said, prancing around, her eyes alight with happiness. "Guess what?!"
"What?"
"I'm expecting!"
"Expecting what?"
"Pups!!! You doofus, pups!"
He blinked slowly, as if comprehending what she was saying.
"Amber! Seriously? You should've told me sooner!"
"I just found out!"
"That's the best news I've had in my entire life!"
Even better then when I told you about my pups?
They skipped around each other, two as one.
She looked at him, " I know...and I wont die on you and leave you to take care of your pups alone."
"I-I-I....she...."
"What a horrible thing to do, you must hate her so much!"
"I don't hate her....she's just a memory now. You're my present. It's always been you."
I gasped. "But you said you'd love me forever!"
"Amber, let's leave the past in the past, and leave the dead behind. There's no need to think about her....she doesn't mean anything."
My heart broke in half, my stomach was engulfed in flames. The words richeshied in my skull. I was drowning, burning, and being shot all at once. I don't know how long it lasted, but eventually the pain went away I died for the very last time.

I suppose fan-fictions aren't allowed. -_-

whats a fan fiction

umm...I'm really bad at explaining stuff, so I would suggest you google it

if youve never been through a heartbreak, and arent really creative or not know what to write about it, i guess you could do a fan fiction :/

I guess I won't. I'll do that warriorcats.com

lol okay then....